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Reading Excuses / Re: 02-22-09 Revast: The Well of Creation - Chapter Two
« on: February 27, 2009, 05:33:33 AM »
Sorry it took so long to get back to you.
I don't have much, but I do want to say that I liked your story. If you’re going to have Rain come back as a character then fine, but if not, then you could probably do without a lot of the banter. Also, I'm having a hard time wrapping my head around a society that puts its women folk "out to pasture.” Most of the ancient cultures that I know of never went that far. I could see the degradation of their women folk but not the ostracization.
I don't have much, but I do want to say that I liked your story. If you’re going to have Rain come back as a character then fine, but if not, then you could probably do without a lot of the banter. Also, I'm having a hard time wrapping my head around a society that puts its women folk "out to pasture.” Most of the ancient cultures that I know of never went that far. I could see the degradation of their women folk but not the ostracization.