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Reading Excuses / July 20- Sons of Keepers Chapter 1
« on: July 20, 2009, 03:50:46 PM »
Hey guys, chapter 1 of my book sorry for the late topic but some things came up. How'd you like it?  ;D

A few questions, do you like the name? It doesn't make much sense but it has a nice ring to it.

also, I'm having a real problem with things going a little too fast. What can I add to give my story more beef without adding endless lists of details?

Reading Excuses / July 13 , Sons of Keepers
« on: July 13, 2009, 10:40:51 PM »
Hey guys, post what you thin here I guess :)

I'm not too good at grammar but I'm seriously trying to learn. So if you could point out the most reoccurring mistakes and the most obvious ones that would help me a lot :)

Also can you tell me how you interpreted the setting and people? I was going for a barbarian/Beowulf sort of thing in this part of my world

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