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Reading Excuses / Re: June 6- SkyhunterCommander-Untitled Sci-fi Epic Chapter 4
« on: June 27, 2011, 09:19:32 AM »
I would very much like to have more information about that event she's so angry about.
Adding that bit of backstory might do the trick, but to be effective, you would have to also insert some reminders of her troubles later (more at first, then less as she begins to forget about them).
The immediate effect would be to have a heavier chapter when you wanted a light one, so be careful in the amount of backstory you want to add.
Adding that bit of backstory might do the trick, but to be effective, you would have to also insert some reminders of her troubles later (more at first, then less as she begins to forget about them).
The immediate effect would be to have a heavier chapter when you wanted a light one, so be careful in the amount of backstory you want to add.