Alright, so from reading this chapter, I found quite a list of things to critique:
1) I agree with Andrew: I have no idea how old your MC is from this chapter. We don't know enough about your world to know how long 16 seasons is (if I were you, I'd just say she's 8 years old. Worst case scenario, your reader will forgive you. Best case scenario, your reader will thank you. I would.) Then throughout the piece she acts at times like an adult, at times like she's five, and at times anywhere in between. Also, if she's 8, why does her dad make her put on a shirt?
2) Related to 1), the time jump from your last chapter is unclear. Since it's hard to judge your MC's age, we don't really know how much time has elapsed.
3) Showing vs. Telling. There were occasions when you tell us what your MC knew or thought. For example, you tell us that she "knew" her dad's sandals went up to his knees. Just say that he wore sandals wrapped around his legs, the wrapping going up to his knees, the top disappearing under his skirt. On a related note, I still have no clue what any of your weapons look like. From your descriptions, I have an odd mental picture of axe-like things or sickle-like things with bones pointing out in odd places.
4) You switch PoV from you MC's dad to your MC with no warning. This happens right after she wakes him up and then leaves the tent while he gets dressed.
5) The scene where your MC gets pelted by rocks really confused me for several reasons. First, why are they attacking her now? Surely they have seen her before. If they haven't, then you need to make it absolutely clear that her dad *never* let her go into the village. Given that it is a village (therefore not participating in village life or being seen is *really* hard to do), this seems unlikely. This leads me to my second reason for confusion: why are they attacking her now? They must have known she was part of the village, or known of her. Also, she is in the company of a protective adult. Most bullies are willing to attack a kid when they are alone, but when there is an adult present, they tend to lay off. Also, most village cultures respect their elders, making the attack less likely in the presence of an adult who is unlikely to approve. Last thing about this scene: even 8 year olds understand mockery and other kids being mean. When a child is attacked or hurt, they generally assume it was on purpose. I really think your MC would realize they were calling her a witch. She might be confused about this, but I think it would be hard to miss. Plus, when she's being pelted by rocks, I find it hard to believe she would be freaked out about witches.
6) Give us some more description of the village. What kind of huts do they live in? Do they cook out doors? Are there stone paths? I want to see this place.
7) I was also unclear about the scene where the dad presents the MC to the chief. Is he holding her the whole time she bows and greets the chief? If so, why? Why didn't he just set her down?
Your MC seems to talk back to her trainer a bit more than I'd respect. Generally, warrior training also hinges on respect. The trainer doesn't need to be a hateful character, but I wouldn't think she'd take any talking back.
Hope I helped.