Thanks again Frog, sorry for the mistake, I guess you did like it! and Thanks Necroben!
1) He had a sense of who the innkeeper was, he was the only guy working there, etc. I can make excuses all day. I guess I should make it a little obvious first. thanks
2) You're right, extend does not work there. I think 'never reached' is good
3)bad mistake on my part, the steps are supposed to, I kind've used creak as a verb in my head, as in Kale was creaking the steps. lol. silly me
4)Yes, a door is a kind of barrier...but I guess I meant more like a slab of wood type of barrier that doesn't open and close on hinges.
5) yes, I thought he unsheathed the sword. maybe I'm wrong. Humph, now you're making me think. Wait, you're right, he didn't unsheathe it! well, as for excuses, maybe without my knowledge, he has x ray vision! No, I need to fix that.
6) Yes, his weapons are prone to attacking him. No, again, a pathetic attempt at a joke at my expense for messing up. Although, some of his weapons he should be wary of...but yeah, I'll take out suspicious.
7)For the innkeeper to hear.
8)yes, quite right, "be in need of later" of works much better than in would in need of later.
9)lol, big mistake on my part, I'll take out the millimetres, not needed there. thanks
10)yeah, awkward sentence
11)yes thanks, 'yet' would be great there
12) it was the only way to go because there was only one door to go through, any other way and he would be discovered anyways.
13)he's old, and is surprised by a guy standing there with a sword attacking him, because he wasn't expecting an attack. maybe he had arthritis or something. (hopefully this explanation works)
14)its bitter because he doesn't really know what he wants, he really doesn't want death, just peace from his tormentors, but he tries to convince himself that he wants to die. hopefully this works.
15)lol, the other guy got thumped by a boot, I need to clarify that sentence, or maybe break it down
Thanks for all the stuff, it was fairly helpful. Okay, so I guess Kale is a bit too dark right now, maybe too cavalier and careless in his killing? And the inn, he just killed the innkeeper, the thugs, and set the place on fire, I never said he was a very subtle assassin. He's just a brute who kills anyone and everyone because he can and because he was major issues. If you remember Euol's Zane, he had a voice telling him to kill, Kale has dozens of those voices, which also torment him and attack him, and try to kill him. He has it a little rough, and takes it out on society. And the killing at the castle was on orders. I'm just keeping the motives secret, because Kale doesn't know, he's just doing a job.
I will try to un darken Kale's character even more than I planned, and I he gets a little sympathetic later on, you start to realize the walls that he's built up around himself. But ohwell, I'm mostly glad that my concepts are liked, because as long as I've got them down, I'm always learning more about writing, so it's all good!