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Re: Superfly Night crew Dialogs...
« Reply #180 on: January 27, 2005, 05:34:19 AM »
Nice.  How many things have you finished?
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« Reply #181 on: January 27, 2005, 05:35:36 AM »
Hey!  I've always wanted to be an acrobat!
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« Reply #182 on: January 27, 2005, 05:37:14 AM »
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Yeah, but why would he drop her from his taxes if he's still paying for her life?  My sister has no income.


Yeah I know and thats why she would qualify for beacoup financial aid, grants and $$. In essence he'd still be paying, but a lot less for college than he would if she went out of state while she was on his taxes...
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« Reply #183 on: January 27, 2005, 05:38:18 AM »
A host of poems and short stories, three books... one doesn't really work anymore, and almost had a fourth done, but I didn't like it and just cannibalized the ideas.  Counting this one, I got four more I could finish pretty quick if I settled on some world history rather than constantly tweaking it.  And I got a bunch of other stories outlined that I haven't really done much with yet, since I already have enough on my plate.
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« Reply #184 on: January 27, 2005, 05:38:24 AM »
Good point.
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« Reply #185 on: January 27, 2005, 05:39:01 AM »
As far as reviews go, you inexperience makes you well suited to reviewing them... you can focus on elements that a groganard(french slang for old campaigner) might gloss over or miss.
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« Reply #186 on: January 27, 2005, 05:39:16 AM »
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A host of poems and short stories, three books... one doesn't really work anymore, and almost had a fourth done, but I didn't like it and just cannibalized the ideas.  Counting this one, I got four more I could finish pretty quick if I settled on some world history rather than constantly tweaking it.  And I got a bunch of other stories outlined that I haven't really done much with yet, since I already have enough on my plate.


And you're holding onto all of this stuff, why?
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Re: Superfly Night crew Dialogs...
« Reply #187 on: January 27, 2005, 05:39:57 AM »
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As far as reviews go, you inexperience makes you well suited to reviewing them... you can focus on elements that a groganard(french slang for old campaigner) might gloss over or miss.


What would I review?
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« Reply #188 on: January 27, 2005, 05:40:39 AM »
Timewasting...
Things you can do to waste time..
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« Reply #189 on: January 27, 2005, 05:41:36 AM »
Cause I want to finish all my worldbuilding first.  I got a huge period of time from 20,000bc until recorded history.  Then recorded history and a bunch of white space that's supposed to go down exactly as it did in real life.  Then I go out to about 20,000ad to when the story arc "ends"... that is a lot of stuff to put together.
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« Reply #190 on: January 27, 2005, 05:42:18 AM »
Seems obsessive Eagle...
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« Reply #191 on: January 27, 2005, 05:42:37 AM »
Hey, I posted at least one or two of my poems already.  That was a big step for me. :P
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« Reply #192 on: January 27, 2005, 05:43:49 AM »
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Seems obsessive Eagle...


Um, duh?  I know what it is after this long.  Its not like I write fast or anything either, I got quanity because I've been making it forever.
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« Reply #193 on: January 27, 2005, 05:44:19 AM »
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Hey, I posted at least one or two of my poems already.  That was a big step for me. :P

Time to take another few leaps then.  

I'm going to keep tormenting you about this, you know.  
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« Reply #194 on: January 27, 2005, 05:44:22 AM »
publish or perish guy...
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