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Writing Group / Re: Welcome.
« on: February 07, 2004, 01:14:43 PM »
I hope i'm posting this in the right place.. I'd like to jump in for the second slot this week.. if it's alright with you'uns.
I'll send out my story today.. it's just a short story I wrote last year. I like to write things and then put them away for a while to ferment. Also gives me a chance to step back and take a fresh look later. So this is one that ready to air out and be critiqued. Thanks heaps!
I'd like to know the basics I guess.. does the story make sense? DOes it have good flow or is it too slow? Does anyone see the connection i tried to make between jona's desicion and her father's desicion?
Thanks so much!
gwenny
I'll send out my story today.. it's just a short story I wrote last year. I like to write things and then put them away for a while to ferment. Also gives me a chance to step back and take a fresh look later. So this is one that ready to air out and be critiqued. Thanks heaps!
I'd like to know the basics I guess.. does the story make sense? DOes it have good flow or is it too slow? Does anyone see the connection i tried to make between jona's desicion and her father's desicion?
Thanks so much!
gwenny