Dunno. But all the other gods have only two colors, but giving yellow and orange (and gold) to Mercystar makes three.
More typos!
P. 307: Siri shrugged. “I haven’t decided yet. My people teach strongly against it. They’re not fond of the way that
Hallandren understand religion.”
Hallandren understands? Hallandrens understand?
P. 317: “Hum,” she said, smiling and
siding up to him.
Should that be sidling?
P. 342: He was
much really younger than he wanted to appear.
Strike that; reverse it.
P. 344: In other lands, one found
parries and steppes, mountains and deserts.
Apparently, one finds many sword fights on the steppes.
Edit:
P. 359: Of one thing remained firm. She was going to learn how to Awaken.
Missing a "she" between "thing" and "remained".
P. 366:
Theses stories are ridiculous and unfounded.
P.376: “Ropes,” she said. “Untie yourself.”
I'm not a grammarian, but I
think the plurality of those two phrases should agree.
P.383: She rushed out onto the street, now lit by the dawn light
filling into the city, and ducked down an alleyway.
The sentence makes a kind of sense, but it also makes no sense at all. How does light "fill into" a city? This may not actually be an error, but it looked like one to me.
Edit 2:
P.394: There was a wall front of her. A dead end.
Missing an "in".
P.400: Perhaps we could shorten it to simple Lightsong!
Missing an "a".
P.411: The massive black temple of a palace loomed above them, sheer ebony blocks stacked like the play-things of gigantic child.
Gigantic Child sounds like a good superhero name.
P.412: Siri was an emotional person, and people had been able to read her regardless her hair,...
Missing an "of".
P.414: If they assumed that she thought Susebron a fool, they wouldn’t suspect
an conspiracy between her and her husband.