Hey Flo, sorry I'm late. Really. busy. week.
Starting off, I couldn't remember if we'd seen Spencer before, but that might just be the "writing group problem" of never having the whole story in front of you at any one time.
Lots a great characterizations, nice action, and your world is really starting to come together.
A few things:
Rubber bullets- it's not clear whether they're the only thing in his cartridge, if he has multiple ordnance options with his weapon, or whether they are simply standard ship-board issue (to avoid perforating the hull).
When Juno was interrogating the Imperial in chapter three, she had to close her eyes and really concentrate to make contact with him, and it took a lot out of her. But she seems a lot more proficient here- is that lack of subtlety (force instead of persuasion) or is it adrenaline? Doesn't need to be explained here (not her POV after all), but I'd like to see it somewhere along the line.
"Sitrep."- this is obviously military slang, and that's fine, but it'd help if you explained the term right after you used it.
Von Bredow seems like much less of a jerk right now, but he may just be hiding behind protocol.
It seems a little odd that setting up jumps is as quick and smooth as you've just presented it. They don't even seem worried about the incoming missiles. Did Starfire fire them at extreme range?
It seems
very odd that they wouldn't have some kind of built-in equipment to allow anchoring to the floor when the gravity goes...
The section where you describe the feeling of jumping- it would flow better if you told us what Von Bredow was feeling first- right after telling us he hated jumping- and then explained it.
All in all, great submission!