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Re: Grammar Questions
« Reply #30 on: May 02, 2009, 03:17:20 AM »
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"…cars, trees, and bullets…" or "…cars, trees and bullets…"

[Those were completely random examples.]
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Re: Grammar Questions
« Reply #31 on: May 02, 2009, 05:34:01 AM »
The comma in the first part that's not in the second part is called the serial comma. Chicago recommends that you use it. Other style guides, like AP style, don't use it. There are good arguments on both sides.
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Re: Grammar Questions
« Reply #32 on: May 02, 2009, 10:14:51 AM »
I prefer the serial comma.

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Re: Grammar Questions
« Reply #33 on: May 02, 2009, 03:26:16 PM »
So, Jade, you're saying…yes second comma?
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Re: Grammar Questions
« Reply #34 on: May 02, 2009, 04:43:47 PM »
I think there needs to be a style guide that focuses on fiction and the issues that come up in fiction. Applying any of the major style guides to fiction is kind of a stretch, and there are often things that are very hard to find in the style guide or just aren't covered.

Publishing companies have their own in-house style guides that tend to draw on Chicago, but a centralized authority would be nice.
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« Reply #35 on: May 02, 2009, 05:12:26 PM »
That would mean a ton of work, though, probably.
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Re: Grammar Questions
« Reply #36 on: May 02, 2009, 05:41:15 PM »
And it would save a ton of work.
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Re: Grammar Questions
« Reply #37 on: May 02, 2009, 06:08:13 PM »
Not necessarily for the people who are putting in the work, though.
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Re: Grammar Questions
« Reply #38 on: May 02, 2009, 06:53:13 PM »
No, it would save them work in the future too, since they could use the style guide as a reference to look things up instead of having to think things through each time they hit a question.

I'm starting to think you're just posting quickly in all sorts of topics without thinking things through in order to increase your post count.
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Re: Grammar Questions
« Reply #39 on: May 02, 2009, 08:11:08 PM »
I am a fan of the serial comma.
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Re: Grammar Questions
« Reply #40 on: May 02, 2009, 11:34:52 PM »
Um…not really. I legitimately disagree with you.
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Re: Grammar Questions
« Reply #41 on: May 03, 2009, 02:48:26 AM »
Have you ever looked anything up in a style guide?
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Re: Grammar Questions
« Reply #42 on: May 03, 2009, 02:57:17 AM »
I always thought the second comma was correct. The only places I don’t see using the second comma is with company titles.
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Re: Grammar Questions
« Reply #43 on: May 03, 2009, 04:24:10 AM »
No. I'm a kid, Ookla. Not an adult like you. I have only the barest idea of what a style guide even is/looks like.
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Re: Grammar Questions
« Reply #44 on: May 03, 2009, 04:49:27 AM »
Your sarcasm is not lost on me, but we may as well just leave it at that.
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