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Re: Superfly Night crew Dialogs...
« Reply #90 on: January 27, 2005, 04:33:57 AM »
And what about (Bwooooock!) SuperChicken?

It was great to hear my kids singing "Speed of lightning, roar of thunder! UnderDog! UnderDog!" Ahhh. Nostalgia.

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Re: Superfly Night crew Dialogs...
« Reply #91 on: January 27, 2005, 04:35:12 AM »
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Perfectionism, or cold hard fear?


Fear of being rejected?  Hmmm, well I guess there is always that.  Its not that I haven't ever finished the story, but it just keeps going and getting changed as I decide I don't like something I already did 10 years ago.
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Re: Superfly Night crew Dialogs...
« Reply #92 on: January 27, 2005, 04:35:27 AM »
Oh I know Superchicken... and Superdave too...

Remember the George of the Jungle Cartoon?
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Re: Superfly Night crew Dialogs...
« Reply #93 on: January 27, 2005, 04:35:28 AM »
I only look good in flares.  

My friend gave me a pair of boot cut jeans over Christmas, and I put them on and my roommate was like, nope.  Not working for you.  

She was right.  
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« Reply #94 on: January 27, 2005, 04:36:37 AM »
flares make women look more curvy...

Not so good on guys.
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Re: Superfly Night crew Dialogs...
« Reply #95 on: January 27, 2005, 04:37:24 AM »
I really should go to bed. I'm going to be skivving off my 9am class tomorrow, but I still have to take the munchkins to school.

So, goodnight superfly groupies.

SuperDave! Now there's one I haven't heard in years!

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Re: Superfly Night crew Dialogs...
« Reply #96 on: January 27, 2005, 04:37:24 AM »
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Fear of being rejected?  Hmmm, well I guess there is always that.  Its not that I haven't ever finished the story, but it just keeps going and getting changed as I decide I don't like something I already did 10 years ago.


I was reading an article today in Writers of the Future that said you should never rewrite unless an editor orders you to--you should just always move on to new things.  I'm not sure I entirely agree, but I think there's some truth in it.  There's such a thing as beating a story to death.  Sometimes you just have to start clean.  
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Re: Superfly Night crew Dialogs...
« Reply #97 on: January 27, 2005, 04:38:19 AM »
Night, Old One.  See you tomorrow!
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Re: Superfly Night crew Dialogs...
« Reply #98 on: January 27, 2005, 04:38:44 AM »
Good night oldie but goody :)

Glad to have you around...
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« Reply #99 on: January 27, 2005, 04:38:46 AM »
Then I'd throw a copy of LotR in his face and say HA!  You can't just throw together perfection.
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Re: Superfly Night crew Dialogs...
« Reply #100 on: January 27, 2005, 04:39:32 AM »
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flares make women look more curvy...

Not so good on guys.


My roommate and I actually discussed that.  We decided that flares balance out curves.  If you're a curvy person, you look better in flares because it continues the curves rather than ending in a tapered point.  If that makes any sense.  
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Re: Superfly Night crew Dialogs...
« Reply #101 on: January 27, 2005, 04:39:35 AM »
Good luck with the sinuses.
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« Reply #102 on: January 27, 2005, 04:40:30 AM »
Thats kind of ridiculous.. of course you should rewrite...
You just need to be able to stop at some point...
Thats made easier by rereading what you've written.
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Re: Superfly Night crew Dialogs...
« Reply #103 on: January 27, 2005, 04:40:48 AM »
I actually never liked the George of the Jungle cartoons, but my Dad loved them and I think he's bought some of them on DVD. I always thought the laugh track was overdone, and the whole running into the tree thing was done to death.

Anyway. Goodnight.

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Re: Superfly Night crew Dialogs...
« Reply #104 on: January 27, 2005, 04:41:29 AM »
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Then I'd throw a copy of LotR in his face and say HA!  You can't just throw together perfection.


Ah, yes, but how many of us are Tolkein?

If you want to get published, and you're an average writer, you have to keep writing new things until you get good.  That's my hope, anyway.  Not that I'm getting any writing done right now.  Why?  Because I'm talking to you people instead.  Not that I'm complaining.
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