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Re: Y.A.S.P... (Also known as Scribbler)
« Reply #30 on: April 26, 2007, 06:38:23 PM »
Unemployment is what gave you the forum you're currently using.
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« Reply #31 on: April 26, 2007, 07:21:38 PM »
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Re: Y.A.S.P... (Also known as Scribbler)
« Reply #32 on: April 26, 2007, 09:51:07 PM »
Ookla, check your inbox.
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Re: Y.A.S.P... (Also known as Scribbler)
« Reply #33 on: April 26, 2007, 10:34:44 PM »
You taunt me so! I'm going to get home from work and find that Karen has already finished it while I slaved away at my September scripts.

Er, I mean...thank you! You are awesome.
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« Reply #34 on: April 26, 2007, 11:31:03 PM »
I believe I mentioned that last summer.
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Re: Y.A.S.P... (Also known as Scribbler)
« Reply #35 on: April 27, 2007, 12:37:49 AM »
Hey Brandon, you wouldn't happen to need anyone to else to read this for you, would you? If so I'd be happy to take a look at it. :)
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Re: Y.A.S.P... (Also known as Scribbler)
« Reply #36 on: April 27, 2007, 01:57:29 AM »
Paris,

Thanks for the offer, and I'll certainly take you up on it.  As this book stars a sixteen year old, you're right in the target to tell me if I have him thinking like he should. 

I'm doing a 3.0 revision right now, which should be done sometime around the weekend.  I'll fire you off a copy then, okay?
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« Reply #37 on: April 27, 2007, 02:40:41 AM »
Alright, sounds good. I have to ask though, you're already on 3.0, shouldn't you be working on Dragonsteel? :)
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Re: Y.A.S.P... (Also known as Scribbler)
« Reply #38 on: April 27, 2007, 06:26:52 AM »
Hey Ookla, did you read it yet?  I finished earlier today. (I just wanted to join in the general taunting.)  ;)

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Re: Y.A.S.P... (Also known as Scribbler)
« Reply #39 on: April 27, 2007, 07:44:59 AM »
Karen HAD just finished it when I got home from work, and she was giddy from the avalanche. I spent the whole evening reading, and finished just now. I will have to digest a while before writing final comments.
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Re: Y.A.S.P... (Also known as Scribbler)
« Reply #40 on: April 27, 2007, 08:56:08 AM »
Avalanche?  Whatever do you mean?

FMP: 3.0 is the draft I send my agent.  1.0 is first draft, 2.0 is fixing major problems, 3.0 is a 10% cut with a line edit to make the thing readable.  It'll only take me a week.  Then I get to grade papers.  THEN I get to go back to Dragonsteel. 
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Re: Y.A.S.P... (Also known as Scribbler)
« Reply #41 on: April 27, 2007, 05:28:46 PM »
The Brandon Avalanche™
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Re: Y.A.S.P... (Also known as Scribbler)
« Reply #42 on: April 28, 2007, 11:36:30 PM »
I would also like to read/comment on it, unless you already have plenty/too many doing so already.

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Re: Y.A.S.P... (Also known as Scribbler)
« Reply #43 on: April 29, 2007, 06:53:45 AM »
FMP: 3.0 is the draft I send my agent.  1.0 is first draft, 2.0 is fixing major problems, 3.0 is a 10% cut with a line edit to make the thing readable.  It'll only take me a week.  Then I get to grade papers.  THEN I get to go back to Dragonsteel. 

Ah, I see. So logical and organized. No wonder I didn't understand.
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Re: Y.A.S.P... (Also known as Scribbler)
« Reply #44 on: May 02, 2007, 05:13:36 PM »
yo, EUOL!!!  I would like to take a look at this!  All this taunting is driving me MAD!!!
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