ALCATRAZ Rewrite Done (Spoilers)

[Bookstore Guy]

I thought Bibliovania was fine.  The word for library in spanish, portuguese and italian is biblioteca.  In french its only slighty different.

Shushnia/Hushnia is ok too, but I dont see them being any more liked by the people who I sell books to in my store.

The iron bookend is a great idea.

[Bookstore Guy]

I acutally had and idea at work (i know amazing...) - after talking to a guy in spanish for a few minutos, I thought of the word Libreria (word for book store if a couple of languages).  Plus this sounds more like librarian controlled...

Since you have the Free Kingdoms, you may want to have some sort of name that implys control over the remaining ones - i dont know, the Libreria Circle or something...

[Nessa]

Just wondering that if it's accepted, will you use a pseudonym since it's YA?

[EUOL]

Probably not, Nessa.  Pretty much everyone I've talked to says that there isn't a lot of interference or confusion when an author writes in both.  So, the crossover audiences (who jump from YA to adult or vice versa) is worth the trouble.