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Re: ALCATRAZ Rewrite Done (Spoilers)
« Reply #15 on: February 03, 2006, 04:21:41 PM »
Ha!  I like Shushnya/Hushnya.  Let me see what Joshua thinks.  Thanks, guys!

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Re: ALCATRAZ Rewrite Done (Spoilers)
« Reply #16 on: February 03, 2006, 04:58:25 PM »
Why not Shushnia/Hushnia? Less slavic, more Transylvania...Pennsylvania...uh...
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Re: ALCATRAZ Rewrite Done (Spoilers)
« Reply #17 on: February 03, 2006, 05:06:27 PM »
Good point.  Easier to read.

Though I'll probably use the Iron Bookshelf.
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Re: ALCATRAZ Rewrite Done (Spoilers)
« Reply #18 on: February 03, 2006, 05:43:52 PM »
[Dr. Evil]
Is it an Iron Bookshelf of Doom?
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Re: ALCATRAZ Rewrite Done (Spoilers)
« Reply #19 on: February 03, 2006, 05:46:28 PM »
Iron Bookend like the iron curtain?

Something with "Bloc" in it... *shrug*
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Re: ALCATRAZ Rewrite Done (Spoilers)
« Reply #20 on: February 03, 2006, 06:21:19 PM »
Shushnia and Hushnia is much better.
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Re: ALCATRAZ Rewrite Done (Spoilers)
« Reply #21 on: February 03, 2006, 06:21:42 PM »
Yeah, Hushnia and Shushnia are definitely easier to read.
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Re: ALCATRAZ Rewrite Done (Spoilers)
« Reply #22 on: February 03, 2006, 06:22:20 PM »
Wow, Fish, we posted almost exactly the same thing at exactly the same moment.  How's that for weird?
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Re: ALCATRAZ Rewrite Done (Spoilers)
« Reply #23 on: February 03, 2006, 07:29:09 PM »
Further evidence that Fish and CtrlZed aren't the same person.
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Re: ALCATRAZ Rewrite Done (Spoilers)
« Reply #24 on: February 03, 2006, 08:01:54 PM »
Or ARE we?

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Re: ALCATRAZ Rewrite Done (Spoilers)
« Reply #25 on: February 03, 2006, 08:05:34 PM »
Spriggan knows too much.  Dispatch ninjas!
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Re: ALCATRAZ Rewrite Done (Spoilers)
« Reply #26 on: February 03, 2006, 08:20:20 PM »
. . . and poison dart frogs!
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Re: ALCATRAZ Rewrite Done (Spoilers)
« Reply #27 on: February 03, 2006, 08:30:57 PM »
Joshua and company aren't thrilled with Hushnia.  It is better, however.

Lately, I've just been thinking of calling it 'Inner Libraria.'  That way, there could be an Outer Libraria too--a kingdom filled with people who know about the Free Kingdoms, and are fighting against them.  
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Re: ALCATRAZ Rewrite Done (Spoilers)
« Reply #28 on: February 04, 2006, 12:30:43 AM »
You mean that the worlds that are under Librarian control would be Inner Libraria, and the Free Worlds would be called Outer Libraria by the Librarians, but the Free Worlds by themselves? I think that would work--make the Outer Libraria be a secondary name, therefore less confusing.
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Re: ALCATRAZ Rewrite Done (Spoilers)
« Reply #29 on: February 06, 2006, 09:47:16 AM »
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Spriggan knows too much.  Dispatch ninjas!

Sprig is one of my agents. Now *you* know too much. You lose.
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