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Alcatraz 1 Acknowledgements
« on: October 26, 2006, 08:00:02 PM »
If you read it and gave me suggestions, post here with correct name spellings!

I had the writing group on this one, I remember.  I think Ms. Fish and Chimera were involved as well.  Ookla and wife, you guys read this one, didn't you?

Edit:  Running List.

Thanks to Stacy Whitman,  Heather Kirby,  Kristina Kugler, Peter & Karen Ahlstrom,  Kaylynn ZoBell,  Isaac Thegn Skarstedt,  Leif Ethan Skarstedt,  Benjamin R. Olsen.  
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Re: Alcatraz 1 Acknowledgements
« Reply #1 on: October 26, 2006, 08:46:31 PM »
Me. Again. (correct spelling: Stacy Whitman)
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Re: Alcatraz 1 Acknowledgements
« Reply #2 on: October 26, 2006, 10:48:45 PM »
I gave verbal comments and feedback and helped with brainstorming. This is one of my favorites, so I would very much like to be included in the acknowledgements. Thanks.

Heather Kirby.
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Re: Alcatraz 1 Acknowledgements
« Reply #3 on: October 27, 2006, 01:31:32 AM »
I read it :)  

Kristina Kugler is the spelling.

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Re: Alcatraz 1 Acknowledgements
« Reply #4 on: October 27, 2006, 01:47:11 AM »
Yup! Peter & Karen Ahlstrom
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Re: Alcatraz 1 Acknowledgements
« Reply #5 on: October 27, 2006, 12:06:34 PM »
Kaylynn ZoBell
If I had any clue, would I be here?

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Re: Alcatraz 1 Acknowledgements
« Reply #6 on: October 27, 2006, 12:59:46 PM »
Posting for my sons who read it and gave you feedback,

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Re: Alcatraz 1 Acknowledgements
« Reply #7 on: October 27, 2006, 03:19:17 PM »
I think you ignored all of my comments, but...

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Think you can spell it right this time?
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Re: Alcatraz 1 Acknowledgements
« Reply #8 on: October 27, 2006, 05:04:50 PM »
Thanks a bunch, guys.  I know that I could probably figure this out on my own, but to be honest, I ALWAYS forget someone.  It's better when I post a thread like this, even when it's generally the same people, so that there's an official place to get names down and the like.  

Anyone else who read it, feel free to add your names.
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Re: Alcatraz 1 Acknowledgements
« Reply #9 on: October 27, 2006, 07:33:29 PM »
I read it.  :)

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Re: Alcatraz 1 Acknowledgements
« Reply #10 on: October 30, 2006, 02:24:53 AM »
I read it! And read it to my boys (who giggled a lot).

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Re: Alcatraz 1 Acknowledgements
« Reply #11 on: October 31, 2006, 09:45:43 AM »
Eric J. Ehlers
I read draft 1 and a part of the second draft you passed around and gave some comments.

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Re: Alcatraz 1 Acknowledgements
« Reply #12 on: October 31, 2006, 08:42:50 PM »
I proofread the thing in exchange for a special acknowledgment.  And I did a darn good job.  So I better get one.   ;D
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