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systemjammers
« on: September 18, 2003, 02:18:08 AM »
I've recently finished a year 12 course of four unit english. Basically, the entire course revolves around the creation of a single text. In my case, it was a short story called "systemjammers". Is anyone interested in reading it? I can send it via e-mail dor anyone who wants it, along with the reflection statement, and precursor to it I wrote "system log".
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Re: systemjammers
« Reply #1 on: September 18, 2003, 06:40:19 AM »
Whats it about? :)

I dislike many genres. I'm picky.
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Re: systemjammers
« Reply #2 on: September 18, 2003, 09:42:54 AM »
yeah, give me more information first.
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Re: systemjammers
« Reply #3 on: September 18, 2003, 10:37:39 AM »
if you want Jam you can send it to me and I can throw it up on one of my sites for a while that way people can just download it instead of you haveing to send multiple e-mails.
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Re: systemjammers
« Reply #4 on: September 18, 2003, 11:25:39 PM »
I could throw it up on my Tripod server if I want, I'm just lazy.

systemjammers is a short story set in a near future cyberpunk setting. It deals with a group of geeks in a terrorist faction called "Cybernetic Redemption." The goal of this group is to bring thought to the common person, to stop them being sheep controlled by corporations and advertisements. It is an anti-capitalist exploration, and questions how far one should go for a cause one belives in.  So basically it's cyberpunk.

I've been told by most of my friends that it's very good. It took a year to create, and I'm happy with it. It's about 8000 words long.

When I get home, I'll upload it, and post the downlaod site.
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Re: systemjammers
« Reply #5 on: September 19, 2003, 05:31:17 AM »
Ok, I uploaded them.

For the major work, and reflection statement: http://swift48.tripod.com/jammers.doc

For systemlog, the precursor to it I wrote a year before: http://swift48.tripod.com/log.doc

They're both in word format because of the formatting. Check them out, or don't.
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Re: systemjammers
« Reply #6 on: September 19, 2003, 09:51:58 AM »
Boo, anti capatalist stories.

But i have read very little cyber punk, guess i'll try it out.
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Re: systemjammers
« Reply #7 on: September 19, 2003, 01:33:05 PM »
You will get feedback later. Like, after I've eaten my free pizza.
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Re: systemjammers
« Reply #8 on: September 19, 2003, 03:27:05 PM »
I want a free pizza, ya know. Cause I'm hungry. Speaking of food, I don't watch the food channel now that I'm not anywhere near home. Since I've cut back on my eating habits. I guess less eating does not equal less mass.
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Re: systemjammers
« Reply #9 on: September 19, 2003, 04:12:38 PM »
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Ho hum. Always check your links to make sure they work kiddies.
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Re: systemjammers
« Reply #10 on: September 19, 2003, 05:11:40 PM »
I get free pizza every friday and I always eat too much.
I especially like when we get cookies too.
But the pizza's nice, and if I'm careful, there will be some saved for my lunch on Saturday if I have to work as well.
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Re: systemjammers
« Reply #11 on: September 19, 2003, 09:14:06 PM »
Try right click-Save as Entropy.  Tripod is gay like that sometimes.
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Re: systemjammers
« Reply #12 on: September 19, 2003, 09:17:16 PM »
Tripod is gay for so many reasons at so many times, it's hard to keep track of it.
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Re: systemjammers
« Reply #13 on: September 19, 2003, 11:42:25 PM »
Ack. Tripod like to be temperamental a lot. It's slightly better than geocities though, so I use it.  Try the right click and "Save as". If that doesn't work, tell me and I'll mail it.

SE, where did you get free pizza? More importantly, how do I get free pizza?
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Re: systemjammers
« Reply #14 on: September 20, 2003, 10:26:52 AM »
granted, it is better than geocities.

I get free pizza because my boss pays for it. It's yummy. You could get free pizza by coming to work for the Teaching Company. Besides the fact that my coworkers and I are sitting around whining about how stupid customers are, it's a great place to work.
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