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« on: October 21, 2003, 08:57:50 AM »
I just read the review, Jeffe. Pretty good. I added some HTML though, to make the paragraphs actually show up, and I changed a run-on sentence, and added a couple punctuation marks. (like, a period, a comma, anda  colon).
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Re: Pocket Uni
« Reply #1 on: October 21, 2003, 09:28:12 AM »
ok, oh add a little note at the end, inserts for magic and fantasy races can be found at their website in the free downloads section. I just found that...
Im gonna tackle Teenage Demon Slayers next and then the adventures since TDS is a World supplement.
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Re: Pocket Uni
« Reply #2 on: October 21, 2003, 10:12:21 AM »
Want to give me an exact sentence? or trust me to write it?
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« Reply #3 on: October 21, 2003, 10:35:10 AM »
I trust you.
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Re: Pocket Uni
« Reply #4 on: October 21, 2003, 10:48:45 AM »
k, it's done. I didn't put it on the end, but tagged it on the paragraph about mechanics
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« Reply #5 on: October 21, 2003, 10:51:49 AM »
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« Reply #6 on: October 21, 2003, 01:10:46 PM »
Hm, that's actually one of the sentences I changed, SE. Sorry to cramp your style.
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Re: Pocket Uni
« Reply #7 on: October 21, 2003, 03:42:22 PM »
hey guys when you put in a URL don't forget the '=' inbetween a href and the actual URL.
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« Reply #8 on: October 21, 2003, 05:57:10 PM »
I'll do what I want.
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