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Re: Help w/ELANTRIS ad
« Reply #15 on: February 26, 2005, 11:06:02 PM »
Chris was emphasizing at TLE today that you REALLY need to get this in ASAP.

Just a friendly little reminder.

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Re: Help w/ELANTRIS ad
« Reply #16 on: February 27, 2005, 06:55:22 AM »
Thanks.

At the latest, I'll have it in by Monday night.
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Re: Help w/ELANTRIS ad
« Reply #17 on: March 01, 2005, 03:43:36 AM »
It's done.  How does it look?  The lettering appears odd on my computer.

http://www.brandonsanderson.com/graphics/elantrisad.tif

(Warning--that's a three meg file)

Old One, do you want me to email it to you?
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Re: Help w/ELANTRIS ad
« Reply #18 on: March 01, 2005, 03:51:55 AM »
It works.

I would have suggestions, but I don't think they are important enough to consider this close to the deadline.

It's fine as is.
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Re: Help w/ELANTRIS ad
« Reply #19 on: March 01, 2005, 03:52:11 AM »
I like it.
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Re: Help w/ELANTRIS ad
« Reply #20 on: March 01, 2005, 03:56:31 AM »
I really appreciate your help on this, 42.  I had no idea even where to start, and your quick, down-and-dirty suggestion for someone artistically challenged really helped me out.  

By the way--did you ever send that invoice to Tor?
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Re: Help w/ELANTRIS ad
« Reply #21 on: March 01, 2005, 05:35:49 AM »
I sent and invoice to Tor a while back, but they never got back to me. Not sure if that means the deals off or what? It's probably about time I contact them again.
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Re: Help w/ELANTRIS ad
« Reply #22 on: March 01, 2005, 05:59:24 AM »
Just like to add that I like the ad, it came out pretty :)

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Re: Help w/ELANTRIS ad
« Reply #23 on: March 01, 2005, 09:37:17 AM »
The only thing I would change would be to take out the word "the" in front of "sample chapters"--so it reads "to read sample chapters." But that's a minor thing. The OSC blurb works well, and you're directing them to where they can read more, so that helps with the getting a bit of the story.
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Re: Help w/ELANTRIS ad
« Reply #24 on: March 01, 2005, 11:35:34 AM »
Looks good, and I think you were smart to play up the fact that you were a BYU Grad.  Considering TLE's audience (mostly alums isn't it?)  that was smart.
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Re: Help w/ELANTRIS ad
« Reply #25 on: March 01, 2005, 12:13:33 PM »
Very good. I agree with Stacer's comment on the "the," and Skar's comment on the BYU connection, and...well, everything, really. I think it's going to look great, provided TLE's current production head knows how to do grayscale properly.
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Re: Help w/ELANTRIS ad
« Reply #26 on: March 01, 2005, 04:59:49 PM »
Changes made.  Thanks, everyone!
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Re: Help w/ELANTRIS ad
« Reply #27 on: March 01, 2005, 05:35:19 PM »
EUOL,

E-mail it to [email protected]  I'll pull it off the computer tonight.

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Re: Help w/ELANTRIS ad
« Reply #28 on: March 02, 2005, 03:10:01 AM »
Probably best to format as a PDF so the text isn't rasterized at such a low resolution...
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