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Messages - Shiael

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Writing Group / Re: What is Civilisation?
« on: May 26, 2011, 02:06:37 AM »
As for how the people treat their minorties, i would reccomend readinf Faith of the Fallen. Fiction, but it has incredible army action and the idea of the imperial order would do well to the contrast of people and their inferiors. Just sayin.

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Writing Group / Re: How many medics does an army need?
« on: May 26, 2011, 02:02:39 AM »
Hmmm, i'd say 3 or 4 medics per 50 men, just in case one dies or something. wild guess.

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Writing Group / Re: non-battle scenes
« on: May 26, 2011, 01:57:48 AM »
it does help. however, let me rephrase. by space filling, I meant time filling, like when peole travel from one point to another and there are no physical battles involved. I get what you say about the change in argument, though.

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Brandon Sanderson / Re: Don't listen to the jerks
« on: May 26, 2011, 01:49:03 AM »
I agree. Whoever it is that whishes to complain about Brandon not writing fast enough when he is working his butt off can just shut their mouth.

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Writing Group / non-battle scenes
« on: May 24, 2011, 12:24:29 AM »
        Recently, I am having a bit of trouble coming up with the mundane, space-filling scenes. They always come up short or I find myself rambling. My detail is fine, and I don't want to bore mself not to mention my readers.       
       
      Anyway, any advice?

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Writing Group / Re: Best. Word. Ever.
« on: May 24, 2011, 12:13:49 AM »
Flaccid. i love the two c's. or dweomer. that just flat out looks wierd. sigh. there are just too many out there :)

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Brandon Sanderson / Re: maybe
« on: May 20, 2011, 03:32:54 AM »
the 'm' dash? Ok. And I am using microsoft word. Maybe I am typing it wrong? however, I doubt it. it works everywhere else. grr. ;)

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Brandon Sanderson / Re: maybe
« on: May 19, 2011, 12:52:20 AM »
hey anybody know what this — is called? my computer wont accept it in dialogue. really irritating.

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Brandon Sanderson / Re: maybe
« on: May 17, 2011, 11:18:43 PM »
I wasn't confused before, but I am now...   

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Ok, thanks. Now that you mention it, I recall Dalinar describing the plate at one point.

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hey do you guys think that a shardplate helm showed any of the face or no? I cant recall if it said in the text.

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Writing Group / Re: Writing Prompts!
« on: May 11, 2011, 08:25:54 PM »
The story of my life..... jk.




   “Hey Sarah, c’mere,” I said.

   “What?”

   “See this? Well, I found an almost identical constituent of information in this book as in this one, which was rather difficult to construe,” I noted, hefting a large, blue, hardcover book. I brushed a lock of brown hair out of my face.
   
   “Hmph. if you had trouble with it, then I don’t even want to try, so don’t.” She fixed her dark brown eyes on me, and lifted an eyebrow. “now, would you mind translating?”
   
   “Honestly, if you can’t understand me now, then you have zero chance of understanding me where we are--unfortunately--going. Help me with these.” I lifted a stack of books off of the desk and dropped them in her hands. “we need to go now if we ever expect to find it.”
   
   “I meant the book, not you. I can understand you. Kinda. And would you please tell me where Jahsak got to?”
   
   “Why ask me? That boy is nonviable to monitor. He is your boyfriend, not my problem.”

   “Fine, walking-talking-living-breathing-dictionary.”

   “Got enough adjectives in there? I dont think that that could be a compound sentence if you tried.” She gave me a flat look that I returned with a smile.

   A crash brought us both out of our daydreams. The door of the tiny cabin caved in, revealing the crashing waves outside of the boat. A stream of curses cascaded from underneath the demolished door. As usual, Sarah broke the dangerous silence.

   “What in the...”

   “Sarah!”
   
   “Was that?” my oblivious best friend asked.

   Jashak and another (very good looking) man burst through the empty space. He was dripping wet, seawater running down the curves of his face. And good old Sarah, of course, had to break the silence again.
   
   “Ahem? who are you? and what do you think you are doing, breaking down our OUCH!” i kicked her shin to shut her up before she revealed any information to the stranger, however hottt he might be. smoothly slipping the several shiruken hidden in my sleeve into my open hand, i drew a thin dagger with my other. i moved my feet into a defensive stance. Jashak came to his aid.
   
   “No! Nella, the captain is dead. He tried to pull something and we had no choice. Most of the crewmen sided with him; there was an enormous brawl. They either surrendered to us or are dead.”

   “Your point being?”

   “We have no one here who knows where we are going, or how to steer.”

   “...Oh.”

   The other guy finally spoke. “Jash thought that you would be able to sail it.”

   “Jahak. Are you flaming INSANE? You have seriously taken a hard blow to the head in battle.” He returned my flippancy with a blank stare. “All right, fine. I’ll give it a try.” I glared at all three of them as I walked out the door.

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Brandon Sanderson / maybe
« on: May 11, 2011, 08:07:53 PM »
 I think there might be something on Kelsier when OreSeur or TenSoon eats his bones.

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Brandon Sanderson / Re: Ink needs to do his own research
« on: May 10, 2011, 03:21:09 AM »
once again off topic here, but i think you would be good with cover art, ink.

and i too pictured him as tall and black. the earring thing throws me off a bit though.

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*sigh* as soon as i finish it AGAIN cuz i just totally messed up

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