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Reading Excuses / May 24th-Drew P- Untitled Prologue
« on: May 24, 2010, 04:03:44 PM »
Be harsh. Be gentle. Whatever. Just be helpful.
This is a very raw, 1st draft so I understand there are a lot of things that need adding/deleting. Just wanting to get a little critique on my style/idea.
This is a very raw, 1st draft so I understand there are a lot of things that need adding/deleting. Just wanting to get a little critique on my style/idea.