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Brandon Sanderson / Re: Favourite Minor Character
« on: October 16, 2010, 12:59:06 AM »
Jasnah will definitely get a focus book, so I'm not sure if I'd count her.
"Magic is what makes fantasy fantastic," someone says, "you can't apply rules to them or else it loses wonder!" I respond, "Sure, but if you want to write them you will certainly want to know how they work." Writing is all about execution, and I find applying some basic laws of physics to magic systems make them more understandable and realistic. Here, I'm going to outline my basic method for developing a magic system.
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The shardplate looks fantastic. That's almost exactly how I pictured it - the intricate arrangement of small plates covering areas that are usually covered by chain. My only complaint is that the poses are a little stiff, and the overall composition feels kind of static, but the armor looks so great that I'm not inclined to complain too much.
"There are a couple other things I'm not thrilled with..." you nailed the main one! I need to work on adding motion. I don't really have more ideas, I tried to make them as move-y as I could, but I've struggled for years with that.
Does anyone have any good advice on how to add more motion into my work? On all of it?
Thank you Peter, I have fixed those. I toyed with the idea of cleaning up the dialogue but in the end I decide to stay as true to the actual audio as possible. I may do a cleaned up version later. Of course, anyone else is welcome to do so as well and I will add the link(s) to my post, with credit of course.
I hold that this would also mean that the Parshendi know of ways to neutralize or destroy the bridges that they are NOT using yet because for some reason only they know at the moment they WANT the Alethi to place the bridges and reach them to fight hand to hand.
Why didn't the Shardbearer just finish him? The Parshendi giant leaned down, then spoke. The words were thick with accent, and Dalinar's mind nearly dismissed them. But here, up close, Dalinar realized something. He understood what was being said. The accent was nearly impenetrable, but the words were in Alethi.
"It is you," the Parshendi Shardbearer said. "I have found you at last."
There are four whom we watch. The first is the surgeon, forced to put aside healing to become a soldier in the most brutal war of our time. The second is the assassin, a murderer who weeps as he kills. The third is the liar, a young woman who wears a scholar's mantle over the heart of a thief. The last is the highprince, a warlord whose eyes have opened to the past as his thirst for battle wanes.
The world can change. Surgebinding and Shardwielding can return; the magics of ancient days can become ours again. These four people are key.
One of them may redeem us.
And one of them will destroy is.
I think his reveals will be a lot more satisfying and methodical that Jordan's ever were. I am not kidding you: I could care less who killed Asmodean at this point!
And it really isn't clear how well-supplied either army actually is with arrows... archery isn't mentioned a lot, wood is in short supply, and I don't even know what they use for fletching (no birds on Roshar, remember?).
I would have thought Vev would be the order that healed.
In addition, maybe Hoid has visited Roshar in the past. Maybe he was there during the Last desolation, or when the way of kings was written? At that time his sculpture was made, for they realised Hoid had some secret power.