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Brandon Sanderson / Re: My mistborn mod map for starwars battlefront2
« on: May 23, 2011, 02:21:40 AM »
You really gotta render that over something other than black.
Aside from that, I think you could do more with the description. I had interpreted his coat as being pure white (kinda like what Elend wears, only more exaggereated), with the pure black vest and trousers underneath it.
From page 571 of my paperback edition:
Of course, we know now that they're also Feruchemical batteries
For some reason I can't quite find a backup for just now, I also interpreted his hair as long.
Aside from that, I think you could do more with the description. I had interpreted his coat as being pure white (kinda like what Elend wears, only more exaggereated), with the pure black vest and trousers underneath it.
From page 571 of my paperback edition:
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He was dressed in a black and white uniform somewhat like a nobleman's suit, but far more exaggerated. The coat reached all the way to his feet, and trailed behind him as he walked. His vest wasn't colored, but pure black, though it was accented with brilliant white markings. [...] his fingers glittered with rings, the symbols of his power.
I'm so much stronger than you, the rings proclaimed, that it doesn't matter if I wear metal[/i]
Of course, we know now that they're also Feruchemical batteries
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Handsome, with jet-black hair and pale skin, the Lord Ruler was tall, thin, and confident. And he was young- younger than Vin would have expected, even younger than Kelsier.
For some reason I can't quite find a backup for just now, I also interpreted his hair as long.