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Brandon Sanderson / Re: Warbreaker: Free Ebook
« on: March 01, 2007, 05:56:18 PM »
Yeah, soap!

Actually I like the idea of just getting rid of BioChroma and using 'breath.'  That seems like the easiest way to do it without emphasizing either color or sound.

Vasher's sword is Nightblood, not Nightblade.

About the actual chaoter...I liked this one a lot, I think because there was more action.  It might be a good idea to try to do something to emphasize the fact that Vasher and Vivenna are drabs when they go after the thieves, because I kept forgetting.  Maybe desribing colors as 'muted,' or something like that.

I thought that it was stated earlier that when commands are half-spoken or mumbled, the breath for them is lost.  So why didn't Vivenna lose her breath when she stored it with a 'half Command,' and why didn't she use 'my breath to yours'?

When Vasher got along so well with the girl and the dogs, at first I though it might be Nightblood's powers, but that doesn't seem in character for it.  However it was done, it probably isn't strong enough to work on adults, which is why Vasher has only used it on animals and a small child; Vivenna probably doesn't need to worry, though there is no telling what he might be able to do when near a person for a long time.

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Brandon Sanderson / Re: Warbreaker: Free Ebook
« on: February 25, 2007, 08:07:30 PM »
I have finally crawled back onto the edge of the Earth! 

In regards to how color is used in Awakening:

We know that black can be used to Awaken (because Vasher has used it), that black is the absence of light and the presence of pigment; that when color is 'drained' from an object is becomes gray, and that gray is the presence of light and in Hallandren (I think) the absence of pigment.  So I think that Awakening drains pigment, not reflected light, and could be used in the dark.

On lifeless:

While a Lifeless doesn't need to breathe, they might be able to breath on command.  Also, while I'm sure a dead plant could be awakened, I would like to know whether it could be made into a Lifeless.

And the last two chapters:

I liked the scene where Lightsong took over the Lifeless.  It was such a departure from his usual character that it really underscored the way he was taking responsibility.

Is the thing about the God King being able to break lifeless quickly true, or propaganda?

As for the 'romance' scene, I got a laugh out of using cliches literally.  If its an unconventionally used cliche, does it still count as a cliche?

It sounded to me like Siri was going to wait until the big meeting and talk to Lightsong then.  But some clarification would be good, and, if she is waiting, why?

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Brandon Sanderson / Re: Warbreaker: Free Ebook
« on: February 10, 2007, 04:49:24 AM »
I'd just always assumed Denth had killed Lemks, likely without Lemks knowledge.  Any other ideas?

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Brandon Sanderson / Re: Warbreaker: Free Ebook
« on: February 09, 2007, 02:57:33 AM »
It was made pretty clear in the early chapters that the king of Idris does not want war, but believes it is inevitable.  It was also very plain that he could not have wanted Vivenna dead.

David,

All BioCromatic entities we have encountered so cannot survive without Breath.  Awaken objects are no longer Awakened when their Breath is removed; Returned die when they give up theirs.  Humans are different because they can give up Breath and go largely unaffected.

What is your definition of a BioCromatic entity?  From reading your table, and your comment in your last post, it seems that you are trying to say that 'BioCromatic entity' describes all matter.

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Brandon Sanderson / Re: Warbreaker: Free Ebook
« on: February 08, 2007, 06:08:58 PM »
I really can't see Vasher working with the king of Idris (can anyone remember his name?), partly because the king thinks that war is inevitable and can only be delayed.  Vasher seems like a loner, and I don't get the idea he has much contact with anyone as far north as Idris.  I don't know why, but I've always had the idea that he recently came from somewhere to the southwest of Hallandren.

Speaking of Vahser, how old is he?

firstrainbowrose,

Now I think about Jewels did say that, but we can't be sure she wasn't lying.

I absolutely cannot see Vasher being a priest.  Priests have to follow rules and respect deities and such, none of which Vasher seems capable of doing.

David,

I don't think that humans are BioCromatic entities, because they are able to give up their Breath and still live.  If humans are not BioCromatic, but are able to Command BioCroma, I wonder if Austre is the same.  Perhaps he is not BioCromatic or human himself, but is able to Command both Breath and a human soul to Return?

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Brandon Sanderson / Re: Warbreaker: Free Ebook
« on: February 08, 2007, 05:05:00 AM »
Great chapter.  I don't know why, but I thought Vasher saying that one broken down door does about the same thing as another was hilarious.

What really struck me was was Vasher's reaction to Vivenna's mention of Clod.  It looks like Clod was someone important to him, and I would be willing be willing to bet that Jewels is a Drab because she used her breath to Awaken him.  Perhaps he was named 'Clod' as an insult because he was an enemy of Denth's, and this would make Jewel's reference to running away with Clod make some sense.

was it created by using a Returned's (god) breath, one with a dark presence unlike Lifesong's heroic one.  The name, Nightblood, is even like that of a Returned God.  Makes me ask, was there ever a Returned named Nightblood.

I think it's more likely that Vasher created Nigthblood–it was mentioned in one of the earlier chapters that he had Awakened metal before.  It would also add a level of irony to Nightblood's comments that it was made for killing.

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Brandon Sanderson / Re: Warbreaker: Free Ebook
« on: February 01, 2007, 05:13:28 PM »
I think Susebron may have the physical characteristics of a Returned because of his Breath.  We found out that enough BioCroma prevents disease and extends life, so enough may physically enhance someone.

Also, we don't know how Returning works or if a baby can Return.  I would think that Returning babies scattered throughout the empire would be difficult to cover; anyone with that much BioCroma will be difficult to cover up or move unnoticed.

I'd also like to know what the rumors Blushweaver mentioned when she said she didn't think the God King's children were all Returned are...

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Brandon Sanderson / Re: Warbreaker: Free Ebook
« on: February 01, 2007, 06:26:02 AM »
You people all to seem to be making a big deal out of 'Seb,' but that nickname has been used before I'm pretty sure.

I don't think Susebron is Returned; that is why he will be able to use/pass on his Breath, and why he gains more from the people who give their Breath to him (a normal Returned doesn't gain more Breath, only energy to survive another week).  His priests have been giving him 2-4 Breaths a week, rather than the normal 1, both to grow his collection of Breaths and so that he doesn't get suspicious when he doesn't fade like a normal Returned would.  Also, the explanation that 'the God King is different' is used much too often for it to actually be true.

I like the way EUOL handled the end of 44; somehow raunchy just wouldn't work with 'Seb.'

So is Lightsong going to tell his priests about his dream, is he going to believe it is prophetic and, if so, what will he do about it?

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Brandon Sanderson / Re: Warbreaker: Free Ebook
« on: January 26, 2007, 02:16:55 AM »
I think Brandon said somewhere that Awakeners can't control how much breath goes into something, only guess and chose what to awaken based on that.

As for Lifeless intelligence, we know that the squirrel's intelligence can't be attributed to having more Breaths, because Vasher only used one to awaken it.  The most probable explanation so far seems to be that it was a smarter than average squirrel while it was alive.

Speaking of squirrel minds, squirrels have practically no long-term memory.  Could this have be true of the Lifeless as well, and could Vasher have chosen to use a squirrel because it would not have any memories of him?  I don't have any idea whether a Lifeless even has a memory, but I can't help wondering.

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Brandon Sanderson / Re: Warbreaker: Free Ebook
« on: January 25, 2007, 07:16:56 PM »
The way people sense BioCromatic auras is by the brightening of colors around the person with the aura: fireworks are brighter around the returned, white splits into its components near Susebron, etc.

People with less noticeable auras (such as Vivenna now) have less noticeable auras that most people must look closely to see.  People with large numbers of Breaths are more able to see the colors, and can sense the changes caused by auras more easily.

I think what you are thinking about with Jewels is that she is not able to sense people watching or approaching her, i.e. she has to actually look at someone to know they're there, while people with Breath are able to sense others' presence.  Drabs are less aware of others.

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Brandon Sanderson / Re: Warbreaker: Free Ebook
« on: January 25, 2007, 04:59:18 PM »
Pterath,

Actually, the squirrel is another thing that niggled at me–it seemed a rather smart squirrel.  Perhaps Vasher is good at picking squirrels.

A Drab can sense breaths in others, only it is more difficult.  Anyone can easily see the auras of the Returned, but to see that of someone with far fewer breaths requires either close examination or the heightened sense of color provided by BioCroma.

Vivenna SHOULD think more critically, but critical thinking is difficult and requires you to rely on your own wits.  Vivenna has lost much confidence and I don't think she trusts herself to make her own decisions.  Also, while Vasher is using her, he tells her so rather than hiding it (though that might only be because she knows he is).

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Brandon Sanderson / Re: Warbreaker: Free Ebook
« on: January 25, 2007, 07:41:48 AM »
Now that REALLY makes me think Clod is a more complex character than the typical lifeless, even if that doesn't say much.  I's also like to know who he was.

As far as the King of Idris being involved in trying to start the war, I think it is plain from early chapters that he does not want a war, only believes it to be inevitable.  Most of what he knows would be based on Lemks' reports, so he may have be being used as a pawn like Vivenna was.

About Vivenna...it's hard to say how a person would react in circumstances like that.  She has just spent the last week thinking about how incapable and worthless she is and how much damage she has just done; at this point she has no more idea what to do than she did when she was on the streets.  Making any sort of decision in that circumstance would be extremely difficult, and most would react by either refusing to do anything at all or letting someone else do their thinking for them.  The latter plan will not help with avoiding being used, but it is definitely easy.

I don't think anyone has mentioned the possibility that Vasher is a sort-of-good guy.  He is apparently against war and wholesale slaughter, but definitely does not have problems with fighting or small-scale slaughter.

Official Predictions of Master Bombadil (for what they're worth):

I am now quite certain that Vasher will teach Vivenna to use her breaths.

I am also now convinced that Susebron will use his breaths at the end of the book, likely to stop the war.

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Brandon Sanderson / Re: Warbreaker: Free Ebook
« on: January 22, 2007, 04:45:12 AM »
I just had another of my brilliant ideas (please, no eye rolling) about how Susebron could use his breath or give it away.

In normal Awakening, when you speak you combine two elements: language and perfect pitch.  The Artisan's script is another language, so that element is already present, but perhaps perfect coloration could be substituted for perfect pitch.

Also, where an Awakener using their voice must be holding something of color, would one using the Artisans' script need to be listening to a sound?

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Brandon Sanderson / Re: Warbreaker: Free Ebook
« on: January 19, 2007, 05:58:15 AM »
Great chapter, I didn't stop laughing the whole time.  Excellent way to force Lightsong into some responsibility.

No, Allmother is not going to last long, with her aged appearance, caring for the people and reference to a need to spread out the commands.

I think Lightsong is more interested in stopping the war than winning it, and now I definitely think he is going to give up his breath for Susebron.

Hopefully, we will also be learning more about Calmseer.  She is important in some way we don't know about yet.

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Brandon Sanderson / Re: Warbreaker: Free Ebook
« on: January 15, 2007, 08:59:58 PM »
It is hard to draw conclusions without having the whole picture.

On communications and the spy network:

I'm fairly sure Lemks was not the only member of the spy network, just the only one that Siri knows about.  Spy networks are secret, after all.  The lack of Idris diplomats is odd, though...

As for Siri contacting her father, I doubt she would even think of it.  She never got along with most people in Idris very well, and was at least a little angry over being sent.  I would have expected her to look for diplomats for advice, though.

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