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Brandon Sanderson / Re: Warbreaker: Free Ebook
« on: December 15, 2006, 04:46:24 PM »
YEAH!!

I knew it...Vasher is the (relatively speaking) good guy!!!  Thanks Mr. Sanderson...that chapter made my day! Vivenna is also (finally) getting less annoying and more interresting...she is DOING something, using her Breath, escaping , not once but twice...she really is getting into her own.

I can't wait for the rest...what is Vasher going to do?...and what was that between Vivenna and the sword? Maybe Vivenna high (if tedious) morals might finally come in handy to serve a purpose and protect her againt the sword bad influence?

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Brandon Sanderson / Re: Warbreaker Sample Chapters
« on: November 06, 2006, 06:14:19 PM »
Hi folks,

well, I'm rather new to this forum thingy, I'm not english speaking (French I'm afraid) , and I'm not by a long shot a litterary critic...but I really love a good fantasy books (hell, I'm a Geek...) and it's fascinating to see  one being written rignt under our eyes...so I though I'd drop by to add my unwanted opinion.

This is about Vasher...I mean, can't suddenly (in chapter 30, page 19) expose him as the Bad Guy, can you? I've enjoyed wondering about him, not too sure what side he was on or if the evil things he did was just the sword and not him. Now, I know he's just the average bad guy who wants to kill those standing in his path...and that takes all the fun out of the character, suddenly he becomes predictable and uninterresting. I would prefer him to stay ambiguous until later when everything comes to a final confrontation.

There is several great characters... perhaps you have too many? The main character might be fleshed out more if there was less secondary character whith a need for bakground...

Thank you Mr Sanderson for this experiment in writing..it's really interesting! I'll keep on reading...(and buying, don't worry!)

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