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Reading Excuses / Re: Sept. 21 - Concord
« on: January 26, 2010, 12:37:27 AM »
I've got to say, the story is getting better as it progresses. I'm most interested in Juno's story of the characters we've met so far.
One unresolved question I had was, how were they alerted to the Dauphin's arrival? You correctly depict the effect that light-minutes of distance would have on EMR-based communications, but did not explain how they were seemingly instantly aware of the ship's arrival. The only thing I could think of is that a ship coming out of hyperjump makes waves that propagate faster than light that sensors on the other ship could pick up, or something. But you don't describe any such thing, and it's just my nerd's brain trying to fill in the gap for you.
If you're relying on light to tell them of the presence of the ship, you should know that it would take a colossal amount of luck for them to pick out an object that small at that distance without knowing where to look. There's a reason we still think we might have more planets to discover. I mean, yes, the technology is more advanced, but there are optical limits that technology can't do much about.
Active scanning (think radar) is more plausible, but that would take twice the time for a round trip.
Beyond that, there seems to be a lot of disobeying of orders going around. My impression is that the imperial military is not very disciplined. I'm not sure that's an impression you wanted to give, but there you are.
One unresolved question I had was, how were they alerted to the Dauphin's arrival? You correctly depict the effect that light-minutes of distance would have on EMR-based communications, but did not explain how they were seemingly instantly aware of the ship's arrival. The only thing I could think of is that a ship coming out of hyperjump makes waves that propagate faster than light that sensors on the other ship could pick up, or something. But you don't describe any such thing, and it's just my nerd's brain trying to fill in the gap for you.
If you're relying on light to tell them of the presence of the ship, you should know that it would take a colossal amount of luck for them to pick out an object that small at that distance without knowing where to look. There's a reason we still think we might have more planets to discover. I mean, yes, the technology is more advanced, but there are optical limits that technology can't do much about.
Active scanning (think radar) is more plausible, but that would take twice the time for a round trip.
Beyond that, there seems to be a lot of disobeying of orders going around. My impression is that the imperial military is not very disciplined. I'm not sure that's an impression you wanted to give, but there you are.