New chapter... cool.
I think one of the things you do consistently so far, is skipping over the scenes which
could come across as "boring" or "trivial," not realizing that they are also opportunities to explore characterization. The aftermath of the battle at the camp, for instance, or Karrys' presentation of the Talonblade to Garrik for another. You give us these details after the fact, but if you showed them to us we could learn so much about your characters just from the way they interact. Why did Tul build the pyre himself? Why didn't Garrik or Dren help? You gave us some of the body language between Karrys and Tul, but only second hand.
This makes your story seem a bit disjointed, because we never get to actually SEE how your characters deal with the aftermath except at a remove. You did this with the examples mentioned above, you did it with the murder at the ball, and you also did it right after Garrik shows the Rite of Eyes. In the last case, it actually works, because the change in his circumstances is drastic enough to let you get away with it, but with the others... you're missing great opportunities to foreshadow Garrik's leadership abilities or lack thereof.
That said, this was a good attempt at moving the plot along without a battle scene.
I'm a little uncomfortable with the inn keeper's character- for some reason he just doesn't feel genuine. The politics of your world are far removed from most medieval settings, but you haven't given us enough info to know what his reactions
should be, so we're stuck with what we already know... and it doesn't fit right. The crazy old man could be a fun addition to the party, particularly as Karry's, Tul, and he all fight for the right to Garrik as
they see fit. That said, he's also feeling just a bit overdone at the moment- more bluster and bravado than actual ability, if you know what I mean.
I have to admit, I'm wondering whether Garrik's black necklace was a plate fragment infused with the Will to hide his identity... and if so, why.
Looking forward to more!