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Brandon Sanderson / Re: Warbreaker: Free Ebook
« on: January 29, 2008, 01:18:45 AM »
Brandon, first of all, I love your work. I like many came to know your stuff due to the WOT announcement. I read both Mistborn books and was hooked. I wanted to try your polished work first before checking out Warbreaker. Since, I read the latest draft, I thought it was spectacular. The only bit of advise I have is an extremely small thing. It involves the scene with Lightsong in the prison when his brother finally snaps. I love having him become a scribe, but I think the part where he always gets his brother into trouble and ending up in jail is a little over the top and seemed out of place. I mean how could a scribe really end up in jail so often? I might have missed something since I was reading so quickly to try and see how it ends, but that is my two cents. I know it is a small thing, but that was really the only part of the book that seemed out of place at all.