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I got started somewhat later, at version 3 or 4 I believe, and sent you a couple emails suggesting more description of the city and geography to better orient the reader. And I had some suggestions for the tone of the repartee between Lightsong and Blushweaver, and finally caught the Vasher/Denth typo. All of which I believe helped firm your convictions of where you didn't want the book to go. Glad I could help.  ;)

John Palmer

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