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Reading Excuses / Oct. 19 - Concord - Ch. 14+15
« on: October 19, 2009, 11:26:46 AM »
Following the last few critiques I received, I went back to the drawing board, refurbished my outline, and ended up cutting the Spencer character completely. He'll still make a few appearances, especially later on, but he won't be a main POV-character anymore. Which is, incidentally, why cahpter 13 is missing. That was told from Spencer's POV and drove home the point you folks made while I wrote it, namely that Spencer sounds far too much like von Bredow.
I also tried my hand at lengthening the chapters, as advised.
So, uh, please find all the other flaws I've cunningly hidden in my latest submission.
I also tried my hand at lengthening the chapters, as advised.
So, uh, please find all the other flaws I've cunningly hidden in my latest submission.