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Reading Excuses / August 10 - Blade of the Fallen - Chapter 17
« on: August 10, 2009, 02:47:26 PM »
thsi is the final chapter of Part I of the book. Let me know what you think.

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Reading Excuses / August 2 - Blade of the Fallen - Chapter 16
« on: August 02, 2009, 01:34:01 PM »
Post here if you please!

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Reading Excuses / Blade of the Fallen - July 27
« on: July 28, 2009, 03:16:53 AM »
I am on vacation this week so I'll post the next part next week. Just a quick heads up here. Cya!

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Reading Excuses / July 20 - Blade of the Fallen chapter 15
« on: July 20, 2009, 10:02:02 PM »
Ignore grammar, yadyada

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Reading Excuses / July 13, Blade of the Fallen Chapter 14
« on: July 13, 2009, 04:42:32 PM »
responses - here

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Reading Excuses / July 6 -Blade of the Fallen Chapter 13 - Chris Swain
« on: July 06, 2009, 03:36:20 PM »
Info dump alert. I know it's there and I need to fix it. Let meknow what you think and as always - first draft and all of that.

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Reading Excuses / June 29 - Blade of the Fallen - Chapter 12
« on: June 29, 2009, 03:21:39 PM »
Rip it up here. First draft and all that jazz - ignore grammmar...

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Reading Excuses / June 22 - Blade of the Fallen Chapter 11
« on: June 22, 2009, 03:53:30 PM »
Through your input here. Thansk for the effort! Ignore all grammar.

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Reading Excuses / June 15 - Blade of the Fallen - Chapter 10
« on: June 15, 2009, 08:10:32 PM »
This is the second half of chapter 10. Please let me know what you think. May need to re-read last weeks to know where this picks up. Let me know if you need it.

As usual - first draft - ignore grammar blah blah blah...

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Reading Excuses / Blade of the Fallen - Map
« on: June 10, 2009, 07:08:39 PM »
If you are interested in getting a jpeg of the map of Aris (The world in which BotF takes place) please respond to this post with your email and I'll fire it over.

Someone asked something about the geography and - well, since I created the map and it will be at the front of the book...

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Reading Excuses / June 8 - Blade of the Fallen - Chapter 9 and 9.5
« on: June 08, 2009, 02:46:16 PM »
I had to cut down chapter 10 in half to keep within the submission word count. Needless to say the rest of 10 is a lot of action and magic - so keep that in mind when critiquing these 2 - thanks.

Keep in mind that the grammar and other elements are all at very rough draft state - this is the very first, unpolished version. (I'm not interested in grammatical errors etc. - that's second draft stuff)

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Books / Malazan Book of the Fallen
« on: June 04, 2009, 09:21:40 PM »
Wondering if I should invest in this series.

I love WoT, Night Angel Trilogy, Warded Man, Eddings, Feist, and Runelords.

My skepticism comes from the critics at amazon and the like. They all keep mentioning that the books are to scatter-brained and hard to follow.

Can anyone here compare them to WoT or other fantasy staples?

If you have read the MBotF let me know if I should.

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Reading Excuses / Only getting Erik and Reonards stuff.
« on: June 03, 2009, 01:43:13 AM »
Currently, I am only able to critique Reonard and Erik's stories as that is all I am getting emailed. If you would like my input please add me to your email list (I am on the FAQ list for RE)

I saw a few stories threads and haven't been able to add input as no emails, so...

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Reading Excuses / June 1 -Blade of the Fallen Chapter 6/7 - Chris Swain
« on: June 01, 2009, 10:09:52 PM »
Please ignore the erronous chapter numbers. the story portion is in the correct spot even though the numbers don't match.

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Reading Excuses / May 25 -Blade of the Fallen Chapter 4/5 - Chris Swain
« on: May 26, 2009, 02:42:41 AM »
Let me know what you think and thanks in advance. I am making major changes based on your help so far!

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