Jex. What the crap? I mean seriously, what the crap? Okay so I read the story, and as far as I can tell, it's just a description of what it's like to be stoned in an alley, right?
Hmmm... I may not be the person to review your story, but I'll try. First, I have some questions.
1) Who are they? You mention a group of people who have wronged the narrator, but you don't give us any other information about them. What do they have to do with the story, and why are they in it?
2) What does the dead body have to do with anything? Why is he lying there stoned next to it? Is the answer "just because"?
3) Is this piece meant to be sci/fi or fantasy? That's the usual fair around here, but I didn't get that impression from your piece. If you were going for sci/fi and/or fantasy, you kinda missed the boat.
I got the impression that this piece was principally a description piece, that you wanted to describe the experience of laying in an alley while shooting up. In that case, you succeeded, although I'm not much help in saying how well you succeeded. I've neither been stoned, nor lain in an alley... so like I said, I'm not so sure how much I can help you.
grr... now my computer is messing up. I'll comment more later, I promise. I guess the long and short of my feedback is that I am confused and not sure what to say about the piece.