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« on: October 07, 2004, 03:10:03 PM »
Ok. I just reread my review of equilibrium and whoever edited it screwed it up mildly. What I submitted read:
"The leaders reason that sacrificing love and joy is a small price to pay for ridding themselves of hate and anger."
What it says now is:
"The leaders' reason is that sacrificing love and joy is a small price to pay for ridding themselves of hate and anger."
In my version "reason" is used as a verb. Perhaps it's not as clear as it could be but I like my version better since the edited version has no clear antecedent.
Could it be corrected please?
"The leaders reason that sacrificing love and joy is a small price to pay for ridding themselves of hate and anger."
What it says now is:
"The leaders' reason is that sacrificing love and joy is a small price to pay for ridding themselves of hate and anger."
In my version "reason" is used as a verb. Perhaps it's not as clear as it could be but I like my version better since the edited version has no clear antecedent.
Could it be corrected please?