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Title: Blacker Darkness
Post by: Fellfrosch on June 18, 2005, 04:36:04 AM
The long-awaited rewrite is frickin' done! Hallelujah.
Title: Re: Blacker Darkness
Post by: stacer on June 18, 2005, 06:10:05 AM
Yay! Email it to me. I promise follow-through. Really. And if EUOL is reading this, of COURSE I'm reading Alcatraz! Um, I'll get to that tomorrow!

Why can't you guys send me audio versions of your books, dang it? Then I could assemble shelves or drive to work and listen to them at the same time.  :D
Title: Re: Blacker Darkness
Post by: Chimera on June 18, 2005, 11:47:45 AM
I'll be happy to read it, as I told you at role-playing. EUOL has mentioned this book enough times that I'm practically giddy with anticipation. (Well, not really giddy--I guess slightly more than lethargic would be more accurate  ;)).
Title: Re: Blacker Darkness
Post by: EUOL on June 18, 2005, 04:19:50 PM
Yay!  Fire me off a copy, Fell.  I'd like to see what has changed.
Title: Re: Blacker Darkness
Post by: Entsuropi on June 18, 2005, 05:04:40 PM
Trogdor demands ritual supplication, and only either burnination or novelation will suffice.
Title: Re: Blacker Darkness
Post by: Chimera on June 18, 2005, 09:50:23 PM
I vote burnination. Oo oo! Pick me!
Title: Re: Blacker Darkness
Post by: The Holy Saint, Grand High Poobah, Master of Monkeys, Ehlers on June 20, 2005, 10:05:58 AM
Hey Fell, I'll read it for yah.
Title: Re: Blacker Darkness
Post by: Chimera on June 20, 2005, 01:10:25 PM
Fell, I sent you a PM with my email so you can send me a copy. Looking forward to reading it. Yay for vampires!
Title: Re: Blacker Darkness
Post by: Fellfrosch on June 20, 2005, 05:10:25 PM
I shall now be sending out copies. I'm especially interested in Entropy's opinion, since the entire book takes place in a country he is 3 billion times more familiar with than I am.
Title: Re: Blacker Darkness
Post by: Chimera on June 20, 2005, 05:12:25 PM
Hey, I've been to London for six weeks! That's practically the same as living there your whole life.
[/end of inane argument]
Title: Re: Blacker Darkness
Post by: Chimera on June 22, 2005, 11:29:32 PM
Reading it. Enjoying it. Making comments chapter by chapter.

Oh, and stacer, if you read this, I haven't forgotten about Black Bull. I often like to read things twice--I'm about to start the second read through and make comments on it.
Title: Re: Blacker Darkness
Post by: Peter Ahlstrom on June 23, 2005, 10:45:49 AM
That's what I told myself I'd do on Mistborn...yeah right...*sigh*

Fell, I hope the next editor who looks at it is more...*cough*...punctual...
Title: Re: Blacker Darkness
Post by: House of Mustard on June 23, 2005, 11:40:10 AM
Stacer, don't waste your time with this -- I've read a little, and it's an uninspired waste of time.  I mean, really: how many more gothic-horror literati comedies does this world need?
Title: Re: Blacker Darkness
Post by: Fellfrosch on June 23, 2005, 01:02:50 PM
This from a man who churns out cheap Mormon potboilers.
Title: Re: Blacker Darkness
Post by: House of Mustard on June 23, 2005, 01:19:33 PM
I prefer the term "Inspirational Erotica".
Title: Re: Blacker Darkness
Post by: Chimera on June 23, 2005, 02:56:12 PM
I didn't know they sold that at Deseret Book...

They must hide it from me.
Title: Re: Blacker Darkness
Post by: Fellfrosch on July 05, 2005, 01:44:40 PM
Okay, time's up. You've all had a couple of weeks to read it, so now you should be done and give me feedback. Pencils down, and hand in your reports.
Title: Re: Blacker Darkness
Post by: The Holy Saint, Grand High Poobah, Master of Monkeys, Ehlers on July 05, 2005, 01:52:28 PM
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Title: Re: Blacker Darkness
Post by: stacer on July 05, 2005, 02:22:45 PM
Uh...
Title: Re: Blacker Darkness
Post by: Fellfrosch on July 05, 2005, 05:12:44 PM
Actually the answer was B. You failed.
Title: Re: Blacker Darkness
Post by: Chimera on July 06, 2005, 11:03:33 PM
Sorry for the delay. I've been out of town having too much fun... I'll send it Fri or Sat.
Title: Re: Blacker Darkness
Post by: stacer on July 28, 2005, 02:54:24 AM
As referenced in the Happy Things thread: Fell! You're leaving me hanging here! I only had up to p. 222 (or something). I don't have the end!
Title: Re: Blacker Darkness
Post by: Fellfrosch on July 28, 2005, 02:28:03 PM
What? This must not be! I'll send you the full version post haste. Must have gotten screwed up somehow.
Title: Re: Blacker Darkness
Post by: House of Mustard on July 28, 2005, 03:14:16 PM
Actually Stacer, I think that's how it's supposed to end.  It symbolic of the uncertainty of life.
Title: Re: Blacker Darkness
Post by: Chimera on July 29, 2005, 01:06:24 PM
Kind of like Monty Python and the Holy Grail?

Sorry, Fell. It's been done.
Title: Re: Blacker Darkness
Post by: Fellfrosch on August 03, 2005, 05:18:17 PM
The manuscript is in the mail and off to WotC. I should have a book contract by this time next week, and a multi-million dollar movie deal a few days after that.

Thanks to everyone who read and gave comments. I think the book is much stronger now.
Title: Re: Blacker Darkness
Post by: Peter Ahlstrom on August 03, 2005, 05:27:21 PM
...and May 2006 rolls around...
Title: Re: Blacker Darkness
Post by: Chimera on August 04, 2005, 12:05:55 PM
Shoot. And I finally got Word. Well, I'll send my comments anyway--and I did give you them in person, so maybe you remembered them as you did the revision?  ???

That's awesome to have it out, though. I hope it finds an audience--I really liked it.  :)
Title: Re: Blacker Darkness
Post by: Spriggan on August 08, 2005, 04:40:24 AM
Umm...Wizards hasn't actually bought the book Chimera they're just actually reading it.  

Personally I'm waiting for the Blacker Darkness D20 supplement.
Title: Re: Blacker Darkness
Post by: Fellfrosch on August 09, 2005, 01:30:00 PM
They're actually going to base the entire 2006 block of Magic expansions around Blacker Darkness. That's more than 600 cards that literally do nothing.
Title: Re: Blacker Darkness
Post by: stacer on August 24, 2005, 12:49:25 AM
Fell will be happy to know I wasted time wisely today and finally finished BD. Yay! I have a bit of feedback--catch me on MSN sometime.