Finally getting the piece, I have to say it was enjoyable. I think, in your future drafts, you should pay more attention to how much time is passing. Halfway through the piece they had been walking for some 6 hours, and more before that. But night seems so far away still. They eventually stop to make a fireless camp . . . . but it seems only because it's "time to stop," not because it's getting late, or they're tired . . . or whatever.
I still have a disinterest in Dias, but this chapter did a lot of work to dispel part of that.
Once again, your use of breaks seems haphazard and silly. If you cut ever # from the chapter and squished all those parts together, you would lose absolutely no coherency and it would actually read smoother. Seriously, you should just try writing without actually using them . . . at all. Unless there is an actual PoV change. I bet you'll like it better. Still can't see why you break the Dias chapters the way you do.