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Writing Group / Re: Unbiased opinions on my novel in progress
« on: July 05, 2007, 03:38:26 AM »
Haha, now that you mention, that first part does sound pretty bad. Hopefully it's just a bad summarization and the story itself doesn't come off quite as cheesy.
I figured I'd probably have a better chance of snagging some help if I make it easier on everyone, so here's the first two chapters:
http://huntermortenson.com/other/Chapter%20One.rtf
http://huntermortenson.com/other/Chapter%20Two.rtf
They're still first drafts. So if anyone does give them a once over, please bare with me on the grammatical errors.
Thanks again!
I figured I'd probably have a better chance of snagging some help if I make it easier on everyone, so here's the first two chapters:
http://huntermortenson.com/other/Chapter%20One.rtf
http://huntermortenson.com/other/Chapter%20Two.rtf
They're still first drafts. So if anyone does give them a once over, please bare with me on the grammatical errors.
Thanks again!