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Reading Excuses / Re: Crystalheart, Chapter 2
« on: January 05, 2009, 01:54:34 AM »
Which would totally explain the single moon
Max is a Shadowblade, a supernatural--and supernaturally competent--warrior bound to protect her witch Giselle. As a Shadowblade, Max doesn't age. She is better, faster, stronger than any ordinary human being. And she hates it. Giselle betrayed her trust to make Max what she is, and though she is magically compelled to protect Giselle and follow orders, Max works against her witch in every way she can. Continue reading Bitter Night
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A single moon shone on the cliff's horizon, giving feeble light to the battlefield.
"How's it going?" Dantes asked.I'd maybe say the sentence in the bold type doesn't need putting in. Or maybe just the speech. Think maybe there'd be a bit more humour if the 'how's it going?" was just answered with a look that both of them knew the meaning to?
Aermyst glanced at him witheringly.
"That bad, eh? Then let's go." He brought his blade to his cheek, and charged.
The two of them sprinted towards the tall man, waiting impassively. And then they danced.