Ok, I'm tired and don't have time to read the other replies, so this may be very repetitive.
First of all, there are MANY typos, sentence fragments, grammar errors and punctuation mistakes. You should comb through this and weed all those out. I found myself looking for errors and not paying attention to the story.
Ok, just a few things.
I....said that I could tell what stock was used in any of your ciders by the taste father when we were here a couple of weeks ago father.
This makes no sense and why the use of 'father' twice?
His son had been kidnapped.
Hold on. A little dramatic and over-reactive if you ask me. He didn't even wonder he just went straight to KIDNAPPING. Maybe ease into this and show the fathers worry progress until he starts to accept the horror that no parent wants to accept. Yes, as a father if I don't know where my daughter is...I immediately get nervous...but my thoughts don't go flying off the handle. I wouldn't assume kidnapping so fast.
His arms and legs were stiff and his stomach churned from fear for his son and his wife.
Why the wife? I know the next sentence says she is waiting for him....but why is he afraid for her? Shouldn't he be sick to his stomach that he has to tell her the news....not afraid for her.
Ok, this kinda made me laugh, think about this sentence.
“I go by Dahael sir, but others have called me worse.” he said after a minute.
"He said AFTER A MINUTE." Put yourself into the story. If someone waited a minute to answer you...you would start thinking they were strange after 10 seconds.
Ok, overall impression...I like it. I like the intro, it was a little boring with the father/son vinyard thing, but you got the story going fairly soon, so good job. I like the feel to your writing. I think it flows very well, something that many RE submitters struggle with, myself included. I like the story in that you haven't revealed EVERYTHING in the first chapter, in fact...I don't know what the plot is, so in my opinion you nailed this perfectly. So many RE submitters tell us EVERYTHING in the first chapter that we know what is going to happen from the get go. Great job. Focus on cleaning up the writing and I think you are good to go.