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Brandon Sanderson / Re: More Art for You to Digest
« on: November 14, 2007, 05:27:11 AM »
1) I like the white dress a little better (i like how viberant the yellow is thought), but I think a dress more modest would look better. And since she is releasing the breath, is the color going to go from her dress as well, and is that a transistion that could be shown?
2) The breath still needs work as well
3) As to whether you include a background scene, I would have to reserve judgment and actually compare the two.
4) I do like the script, and I like the title too, Warbreaker sounds good to me, and I think with the cover as is might be more apt to sell, the cover is only seen while facing out, I often pick-up books because of the title. WB has just got more umph!! to me.
2) The breath still needs work as well
3) As to whether you include a background scene, I would have to reserve judgment and actually compare the two.
4) I do like the script, and I like the title too, Warbreaker sounds good to me, and I think with the cover as is might be more apt to sell, the cover is only seen while facing out, I often pick-up books because of the title. WB has just got more umph!! to me.