Thanks. Â I'd like to say something about the other poems, but I really just don't know enough about poetry to say more than simply what I liked or disliked. Â A few of them I think have clever structure, and a lot of them are about things I'd never think of. Â I tend to focus (probably too much) on things like heroes and monsters and "cool" factor, and so more introspective things aren't frequently on my mind (not just in writing poems and stories either).
As for it looking like it was a fantasy story, I'm glad since most of the poems I write are for my own fantasy world. Â But as I'm not too practiced at the craft, not all of them turn out that good. Â Actually, looking through some of them, here is a more light-heared one. Â Its a child's poem that is about the one sure way to defeat a fairie.
Sing me a tune, oh faerie fair,
 for my worries are much to bear.
A chant to make the day seem brighter,
 and these burdens a little lighter.
Take my hand, oh faerie fair,
 and we'll dance with nay to care.
Atop the flowers shall we play,
 while we celebrate this cheery day.
Lead me away, oh faerie fair,
 let us retire to your lair.
There we'll play a riddle game
 of who can guess the other's name.
Anyway, I've liked this thread and wanted to participate for awhile. Â I just kept forgetting or got too lazy to look though my text files for them. Â I haven't wrote any for awhile, now you got me wanting to try making a few more. Â Maybe I'll try one about something more personal, like my need to brood. Â lol.