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Reading Excuses / Re: Crystalheart, Chapter 2
« on: January 05, 2009, 01:54:34 AM »
Which would totally explain the single moon
"Magic is what makes fantasy fantastic," someone says, "you can't apply rules to them or else it loses wonder!" I respond, "Sure, but if you want to write them you will certainly want to know how they work." Writing is all about execution, and I find applying some basic laws of physics to magic systems make them more understandable and realistic. Here, I'm going to outline my basic method for developing a magic system.
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A single moon shone on the cliff's horizon, giving feeble light to the battlefield.
"How's it going?" Dantes asked.I'd maybe say the sentence in the bold type doesn't need putting in. Or maybe just the speech. Think maybe there'd be a bit more humour if the 'how's it going?" was just answered with a look that both of them knew the meaning to?
Aermyst glanced at him witheringly.
"That bad, eh? Then let's go." He brought his blade to his cheek, and charged.
The two of them sprinted towards the tall man, waiting impassively. And then they danced.