I've spent the better part of the last couple hours sitting in the library writing a short story. I'm going to try and finish it after class and band practices tonight, and before I edit it for content or grammar myself, I'd like to get a few opinions on it. It looks like it will be about 4-6k words when I'm done, and I feel it is moderately decent.
Anyway, if anybody would like to read some amateur sci-fi/historical fiction and give me some feedback, preferably some people with writing experience, I'd be pretty happy about it. I also wrote a less than 1,500 word short surrealist piece I don't feel is too great, but could be good with a little improvement (it's short, though, so like a five minute read if that).
So, if you're feeling like you'd like to do me a favor or you'd like to have something to chill with, I'd like the feedback. Preferably people who think they could read it in the next two or three days and let me know. I promise it is at least readable.
Thanks!