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Brandon Sanderson / Re: Warbreaker: Free Ebook
« on: March 16, 2008, 06:32:48 PM »
Hi, new to the forums. First post actually. I finished 2 of your other novels and really liked them but won't go into that here. I've read your first 6 chapters that you've posted on your website and I'll continue to read them as they come up. Since you seem to be inviting feedback I thought I would mention this:
In the prologue Vasher kills Vahr in exchange for his breath. What surprised me was Vahr's willingness to die. Why did he not demand that Vasher helps him escape for his breath. Was it too hard to free Vahr but not too hard to free himself? Did Vahr not want to live without Breath? This point seems to remain unclear.
I have been enjoying your novel throughly I just felt that this point might be worth addressing.
In the prologue Vasher kills Vahr in exchange for his breath. What surprised me was Vahr's willingness to die. Why did he not demand that Vasher helps him escape for his breath. Was it too hard to free Vahr but not too hard to free himself? Did Vahr not want to live without Breath? This point seems to remain unclear.
I have been enjoying your novel throughly I just felt that this point might be worth addressing.