*He thought it was a bug? If I wasn't sure of his age before I was now. Yup, nine years old.
*The fight itself was almost too clean, all sweeping motions and sure thrusts and throwing knives without looking. part of the biggest problem I have is that its almost too easy for Jo'hon.
*Interesting. I hope this won't be the run-of-the-mill magic users' guild you see in most epic fantasies.
*You have a lot of biblical names that you don't really see a whole lot of anymore, at least not where I live. (Saul, Jonah) Just remember if you continue in that vein it will give your story a certain flavor.
* I was trying to get Saul to tell a really bad lie. I’ll have to think of something else.
* I wanted to give a feel for just how good he is. He’s been studying swordplay for 20
years. Was there a sense of skill to what he did? Or did it just fall flat?
* Well I hope not. There will be more costs to magic than we’ve seen so far. But even
if I don’t do the school right, it won’t be there long anyhow.
* There are quite a few biblical references as the book of Revelations was a large
influence, hence the name; Seven Seals.
it's ok to be strange, as long as it's on paper.
I think I shall make that my new slogan... all credited to you of course.
Haha, feel free.