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Reading Excuses / July 20- Sons of Keepers Chapter 1
« on: July 20, 2009, 03:50:46 PM »
Hey guys, chapter 1 of my book sorry for the late topic but some things came up. How'd you like it?
A few questions, do you like the name? It doesn't make much sense but it has a nice ring to it.
also, I'm having a real problem with things going a little too fast. What can I add to give my story more beef without adding endless lists of details?
A few questions, do you like the name? It doesn't make much sense but it has a nice ring to it.
also, I'm having a real problem with things going a little too fast. What can I add to give my story more beef without adding endless lists of details?