Your call, Kije. The hard copy is floating around various places right now. If you want to go electronic, just send me an email at gandalf ala timewastersguide.
SE: I still intend to respond to that email you sent me regarding your own project. I'm behind on my emails. A lot. I'll try and be proactive and send you something this week.
(Oh, and BTW, I don't expect specific page references. Anything you can give me on the general flow of the story--particularly if you think sections are too slow or need to be cut--will help. And, be honest. Remember, I'll be releasing this book in a national market. You could pull punches for other friends when you read their books, since they have time to improve before they try publishing. I don't have that luxury anymore. This will be on the shelves competing with Jordan, Martin, and Hobb. If you think sections of it aren't competitive with the current market, I need to know what they are.)