Timewaster's Guide Archive

Just submit poems you have read and like, or orginal stuff. I Just like poetry ingeneral. If you want an opinion or comments on what ou wrote, ask. Otherwise, dont mess around with what people wrote unless that what they put it up for. I'll start off with somethng I worte not too long ago:

Emptiness,
This void just a familiar caress,
Time passes, always a second guess,
Questioning why,
What is life being pulled by?
Constantly continuing, never going anywhere,
Nowhere is becoming much too hard to bear,
Is there any good reason to pretend to care?
Habit results in progression,
Life is a worthless competition,
And I cant see the finish line,
If only I could buy some time,
Break this rhythm and this rhyme,
Routine is slowly taking its toll,
Hold so few years, yet feel so old,
Old and worn,
Soul full of scorn,
For a world full of nothing but the same,
Mindless bodies fighting to win the game,
Cant even place, my motivation is lame,
Purpose and passion are what I lack,
Something, anything, to put me back on track,
Find myself and happiness,
Forget all this trouble and this mess,
So tired of feeling so much less.

* Fell free to comment, I dont mind