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Krag the Unbeliever, ch 1
The Holy Saint, Grand High Poobah, Master of Monkeys, Ehlers:
you waited that long to start him? Rachael's only 4 months, and she helps me.
Fellfrosch:
It's not that I started him, it's that he came over and started pushing buttons while I was typing. He's a headstrong little fellow, which is good considering how often he beats his head against some kind of solid object.
Gemm: Rock & Roll Star; Born to Rock:
Woot, I encourage that Fell.
Lieutenant Kije:
Head banging must be some kind of infant extreme sport. He doesn't want to just drool or gurgle, he's got to have the head bang rush.
Gemm: Rock & Roll Star; Born to Rock:
Alright, I've finished chapter 1 and I must say I enjoyed it a lot. Please get this one published.
I have no idea who this Carl is that SE is refering to, so I can't compare there.
The clan name is a good one.
My thoughts on why everyone started fighting: Since there is some sort of reason for those simplistic people (with the most confusing calendar) to sac as many villiages as they can, I think Krag uses his poor lute playing to bring the town(s) down on themselves.
Unless of course he doesn't participate in that. Then the scene is just a fun funny scene.
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