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Brandon Sanderson / Re: Warbreaker: Free Ebook
« on: March 01, 2007, 05:56:18 PM »
Yeah, soap!
Actually I like the idea of just getting rid of BioChroma and using 'breath.' That seems like the easiest way to do it without emphasizing either color or sound.
Vasher's sword is Nightblood, not Nightblade.
About the actual chaoter...I liked this one a lot, I think because there was more action. It might be a good idea to try to do something to emphasize the fact that Vasher and Vivenna are drabs when they go after the thieves, because I kept forgetting. Maybe desribing colors as 'muted,' or something like that.
I thought that it was stated earlier that when commands are half-spoken or mumbled, the breath for them is lost. So why didn't Vivenna lose her breath when she stored it with a 'half Command,' and why didn't she use 'my breath to yours'?
When Vasher got along so well with the girl and the dogs, at first I though it might be Nightblood's powers, but that doesn't seem in character for it. However it was done, it probably isn't strong enough to work on adults, which is why Vasher has only used it on animals and a small child; Vivenna probably doesn't need to worry, though there is no telling what he might be able to do when near a person for a long time.
Actually I like the idea of just getting rid of BioChroma and using 'breath.' That seems like the easiest way to do it without emphasizing either color or sound.
Vasher's sword is Nightblood, not Nightblade.
About the actual chaoter...I liked this one a lot, I think because there was more action. It might be a good idea to try to do something to emphasize the fact that Vasher and Vivenna are drabs when they go after the thieves, because I kept forgetting. Maybe desribing colors as 'muted,' or something like that.
I thought that it was stated earlier that when commands are half-spoken or mumbled, the breath for them is lost. So why didn't Vivenna lose her breath when she stored it with a 'half Command,' and why didn't she use 'my breath to yours'?
When Vasher got along so well with the girl and the dogs, at first I though it might be Nightblood's powers, but that doesn't seem in character for it. However it was done, it probably isn't strong enough to work on adults, which is why Vasher has only used it on animals and a small child; Vivenna probably doesn't need to worry, though there is no telling what he might be able to do when near a person for a long time.