Granite Sunrise

[wcarter4]

Thanks Jason. I've already begun doing revisions to my prologue actually. I'm making the fight a little longer (and uglier for Dahael), but not by too much. Few people realize just how short knife fights tend to really be. Thanks for pointing out the Vales typo. I hadn't caught that for some reason and a dead/cremated man should most certainly not be walking through the woods.

[jwdenzel]

Few people realize just how short knife fights tend to really be.

I forgot to mention that.  When I read it, I noticed that it was short and realistic. I appreciated that.  But, for dramatic effect, a "little" longer wouldn't hurt.  I mean... how realistic is ending a knife fight with a pot of soup? hehehe