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Reading Excuses / Re: The Rules Of Reading Excuses
« on: March 23, 2009, 06:50:25 PM »
I'm confused - why not leave submissions in your email client until you're ready to read them? Shoot, you could even set up a filter to sort email from group members into its own folder - then your computer would do all the work for you! I know that takes some setup effort, but being lazy is hard work sometimes.  ;D

Not that I'm against helpful filenames, I just figure the problem could also be solved by storing the documents in their original context, and that would be more effective than trying to get others to change their file management habits.

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Reading Excuses / Re: 16 March 2009 - Sea of Sand - part 1
« on: March 22, 2009, 12:42:49 AM »
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First of all, thanks for sharing!

The thanks are flowing in the wrong direction here. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on it. ;)

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Writing Group / Re: Re: The Decline of Reading
« on: March 22, 2009, 12:37:16 AM »
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I don't think so.  In my experience there has always been a stigma against reading books.
I think also there's a sense of distaste and displeasure attached to books and reading (like…associated imagery, except with emotion? something like that) because they are so often associated with school (which, needless to say, is the object of many a young child's anger and frustration).

Actually, that's something I've never understood about the human race. If you're a kid and seen reading by your peers, they will actively taunt and persecute you for it. Also, the same will happen if you show passion or enthusiasm for anything that isn't sports. The teacher is the enemy, so you can't be seen fraternizing with them, either. I'm SO glad my public school experience is far behind me.

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hey Bastille you can re-site more then the entire first chapter and the prologue along with randome quotes; you can recite the whole book and the letter from Shasta in the second book along with the alternate ending and random quotes. ;D
i have really spent too much time around Bastille, i know too much about you. ::)
-Shasta


Shasta, were extended family. Of coarse you know me to much and I know you to much. Stop telling them things!!! I don't want people here thinking I'm weird like everyone else!!  ;D

It's a bit late for that now.  ;D

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Music / Re: What are you Listening to?
« on: March 19, 2009, 07:42:24 AM »
I hate getting music from other people's mp3 players because they always have one song from that CD two songs from that one.

I'm the type of person that listens to a full CD before I move on to something else.  I almost never think "I want to listen to that song" it's almost always "I want to listen to that CD."


Me too! I can't understand people who only get the radio hits - those are usually the worst songs on the album!

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Music / Re: Great bands you've never heard of
« on: March 19, 2009, 07:40:31 AM »
I've already found some good stuff. Thanks for the suggestions, guys!

My turn again: Dave Beegle - Beyond the Desert. This is one of my favorite CDs. It's sort of a fusion of classical guitar and modern acoustic rock, with a side of Flamenco. All 7 tracks are instrumental, and I love them all.

Also, check out Meese. They just have a 4-song EP out for now, but all four songs are great.

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Reading Excuses / Re: Email List + Submission Dates
« on: March 18, 2009, 06:37:13 AM »
Hey jwdenzel - when you submit (or whenever, actually; I don't mind) could you please send me whatever you've submitted in the past so I'm not totally lost? If not, I don't know how much help I could be.

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Reading Excuses / Re: Writing Groups: An Essay by Dan Wells
« on: March 18, 2009, 06:31:57 AM »
Hey Silk - how do you go about marking up documents for people?

In my case it should be pretty easy, since I'm an incredibly huge nerd. I write in Markdown format using a plain text editor. When "marking up" my stuff, feel free to just make whatever changes you want, without care for marking what you changed. I can then diff your version against mine and see exactly what you changed very quickly.

However, I recognize that few people work the way I do. So, if I were to do a line edit on someone else's stuff, what's the best way to go about that?

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Brandon Sanderson / Re: Mormon Doctrine & Sanderson's Writing
« on: March 17, 2009, 08:15:13 PM »
Also according to the article, an Egyptologist was expelled from the Mormon church for pointing out that Joseph Smith had made an error in translating an ancient document.

So here we have the Mormon church threatening to expel academics for stating simple incontrovertible facts based on their own research. In this day and age, the leadership of very few faiths would do so.

In light of all this, I think I'm absolutely justified in my suspicion that Sanderson must ensure that nothing in any of his books could potentially anger the Mormon church elders if brought to their attention.  This in turn may influence the writing of the last book in the Wheel of Time series.

EDIT: impolite comments redacted. Skeptic, if you read it before I removed it, I apologize.

Ok. Do you honestly believe that Brandon Sanderson, or any author of fiction, could be expelled from (or even reprimanded by) the Church for something he wrote in a work of fiction? Let me assure you: that's bunk.

In fact, I doubt the church would convene a disciplinary council over an academic paper either. If he were a professor at BYU they might have fired him (which is, by the way, a policy I don't wholly agree with), but excommunication...that's reserved for more serious offenses. I'm willing to bet there's more to that story than anyone is telling you, or ever will, because details of such proceedings are private.

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Brandon Sanderson / Re: Mormon Doctrine & Sanderson's Writing
« on: March 17, 2009, 07:57:12 AM »
Skeptic: I won't bother to rebut most of your post. I get the feeling you're not here for a doctrinal discussion, and trying to engage you in one would just waste everyone's time. I will, therefore, attempt to address what appears to be your purpose in posting, as nearly as I can discern: I'll attempt to assuage your stated concerns about Brandon being Mormon and how it might affect his writing.

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It is disingenuous to argue that Mormon preaching and practice as directed by the leaders of its church wasn't racist until quite recently (after 1978).

It's equally disingenuous to argue that a policy that was discontinued in 1978 has any bearing on the contemporary church or its members.

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What is particularly disturbing about the Mormon faith, though, is its monolithic nature, and the lack of any real dissent within its church. When it comes to matters of faith, its followers march in lock-step unison. They are literalists when it comes to the interpretation of scripture (Sanderson has explained matters of faith here with the apparently self-sufficient explanation, "It's in the Scripture.").

You say that like it's a bad thing. In a religion, that's a strength.

Scientists benefit greatly from a healthy dose of skepticism, because they don't have an absolute source of truth and must operate under the assumption that everything they know might be wrong. Dissension in such a context is healthy and serves ultimately to shore up the body of scientific knowledge.

Believers in a religion, on the other hand, can go straight to a source of truth that they know to be reliable: God. Mormons are strongly encouraged to verify that some truths come from God, and which those are (this is called a personal testimony). We do this simply by asking him, following the instructions laid out in Moroni 10:3-5.

It should be obvious that arguing and disputing truth that comes from an unchanging god is unproductive and pointless: either it's true and you know it, or it isn't. We are thus commanded to be united (one heart and one mind), and not to engage in fruitless doctrinal disputations.

Let me close with a general admonition not to judge people based on what you think you know about their religion. You seem to think that Mormons are all horrible people because of a few things you read in some anti-Mormon literature. How many Mormons have you actually known? I'm not going to pretend that we're all perfect saints (that's just ridiculous - of course every barrel has a few bad apples), but I feel confident that if you were to actually give us a chance we'd surprise you with how non-murderous, non-racist, and how generally good we are.

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I wish to revise my prior statement. The role was clearly meant for a man; however, for some reason, they cast a woman to fill it.

Also, the hideousness of that video will haunt my nightmares for the rest of my life.

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First, no way is that a man. Definitely feminine. Second, she looks too old to be Bastille. Remember that she's only 13-14. That chick looks closer to 18, and could be as old as mid-twenties.

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Reading Excuses / Re: 16 March 2009 - Sea of Sand - part 1
« on: March 16, 2009, 11:45:04 PM »
Thanks for your comments!

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That being said, I don't see how this can be done in under 10,000 words and not feel rushed. It might be it might not, but don't set a length for it let the story tell itself at it's own pace.

10,000 is my best guess based on what I have plotted out. We'll see how close I was when I get there. ;)

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Is there a reason to show Selendy witnessing her father right after he killed her mother with no previous mention? It may have had an impact on her, but it had nothing to do with her killing her boss or her current predicament.

Hopefully, this should become clear by the end of the story. If it still isn't working after that then please let me know.

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Brandon Sanderson / Re: Mormon Doctrine & Sanderson's Writing
« on: March 16, 2009, 08:51:14 PM »
All writers put their worldview into their works. They don't do it intentionally or deliberately - it's an unavoidable consequence of being human. As a reader, you can't avoid it unless you want to stop reading.

There are a lot of things in Mistborn that resonate positively with me, as a Mormon. I can clearly see the influence of the LDS perspective; it's one I share, and I like that. Elantris - actually, it was the Mormon view on courtship, family, and love that came through strongest in that one for me.

As a counterexample, I've read a few books by Holly Lisle. They're great stories, and I have nothing against her skill as a writer. However, she has very strong liberal and libertarian political views and a vehement anti-religious bent, and it shows in her writing. I don't hold it against her; it is, as I said above, not only natural, but inevitable. Nevertheless, it lessened my enjoyment of the books enough for me to stop reading.

Can you enjoy an author's work whose worldviews you don't agree with? That's the question you've got to ask yourself. In my case, it depends on the author, and on the views.

Now, let me ask you something.

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I'm interested in how others feel about how Sanderson's faith has influenced his novels, with examples given from his writing, and also any portions of his novels that reveal a break with Mormon teachings. If I'd been aware of Sanderson's beliefs at the time I'd read his books, I'd have had a keen eye on which characters if any imbibed coffee or smoked tobacco.

Why do you care about things that reveal a break with Mormon teachings? Are you looking for fuel to call the author a hypocrite? Or are you just trying to feel better about reading a book written by a Mormon?

I don't remember any mention of either coffee or tobacco in any of Sanderson's works. As far as I can tell, they don't exist in his fantasy worlds. Tea exists in Mistborn, and is drunk by characters both good and bad. Same with alcohol. What does this say about Sanderson, or his books?

Actually, not a whole lot. So he portrays characters doing things he would not himself do. News flash: that's what authors of fiction do. Again, I'm not sure why you even care.

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Reading Excuses / 16 March 2009 - Sea of Sand - part 1
« on: March 16, 2009, 09:03:13 AM »
I know I promised you 1700 words. Well, somewhere between now and then it turned into 2700. I hope nobody minds. :)

Here are a few brief details about the story:

- This will be a short story - I'm shooting for somewhere south of 10,000 words.
- The (working) title is "Sea of Sand".
- Though I've written several little things here and there over the years, this is my first attempt at a "real" (as in, "I plan on trying to sell it" real) work of fiction. I have no illusions that my first attempt will turn out publishable, but don't let that stay the hand of critiquing.
- I suck at naming things. It's one of my failings as a human being (fear for my unborn children). You've been warned...

That's it. Thanks for reading!

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